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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i think Narcissa Malfoy and Harry should be a ship, a way to get back at Draco!
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WoW that was abolutely great, loved every moment of it!!! ^_^
I am happy that you are makeing it a HArry/Hermione in the end but i am asking you...no i am begging you that you wont have Hermione haveing sex with anybody else then Harry!!! PLEASE!!!
I am happy that you are makeing it a HArry/Hermione in the end but i am asking you...no i am begging you that you wont have Hermione haveing sex with anybody else then Harry!!! PLEASE!!!
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i am sorry you needed to move the story. I anjoy reading the enite lot of your stories. You have great imagination. I don\'t always agree with your theories but who am i to complain They are your stories not mine. i hope this does not sound condesending. Keep up the good work!
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Harry\'s such a slut! :D
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Erg. Damned ff.net. They let so much more \'adult\' shit slip right through. Well, here\'s my 2 reviews from ff.net reposted for future generations. :)
2nd review (chapter 3)
Poor, poor Cho. Harry really was a jerk, wasn\'t he? I can just imagine Cho\'s dad finding out and chasing Harry around Hots wts with a butcher knife. heh...
Can\'t wait to read about Luna next. I never thought of her as mentally retarded or anything; where do ppl come up with this stuff? She\'s just slightly eccentric. As for Hermione being \'raped\'... coon aon and force are worlds apart.
1st review (chapter 1&2)
I\'m not crazy about Ron punching Harry, but everything else has been great so far. OOC for sure with the trio so far IMO, but entertaining regardless. Pansy was portrayed perfectly I think.
Chicks I\'d like to see with their own smutty chapter:
Tonks
Fleur
girl!Blaise
Rosmerta (from The Three Broomsticks; I guess that\'s out of your age range, but I\'d still like to see it)
Susan Bones
Lavender
Padma
Luna
Ginny
Angelina (I know she graduated, but still...)
Just a few suggestions, feel free to ignore. Can\'t wait to read about Harry and Cho, keep up the good work!
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2nd review (chapter 3)
Poor, poor Cho. Harry really was a jerk, wasn\'t he? I can just imagine Cho\'s dad finding out and chasing Harry around Hots wts with a butcher knife. heh...
Can\'t wait to read about Luna next. I never thought of her as mentally retarded or anything; where do ppl come up with this stuff? She\'s just slightly eccentric. As for Hermione being \'raped\'... coon aon and force are worlds apart.
1st review (chapter 1&2)
I\'m not crazy about Ron punching Harry, but everything else has been great so far. OOC for sure with the trio so far IMO, but entertaining regardless. Pansy was portrayed perfectly I think.
Chicks I\'d like to see with their own smutty chapter:
Tonks
Fleur
girl!Blaise
Rosmerta (from The Three Broomsticks; I guess that\'s out of your age range, but I\'d still like to see it)
Susan Bones
Lavender
Padma
Luna
Ginny
Angelina (I know she graduated, but still...)
Just a few suggestions, feel free to ignore. Can\'t wait to read about Harry and Cho, keep up the good work!
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fucking FF.net lowlifes. Pitiful shmucks. For once, a fun story is on their disgusting site and they remove it.
Forget about the fucking good for nothings and keep up the good work.
XOXOX
Forget about the fucking good for nothings and keep up the good work.
XOXOX
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Didn\'t know they could just remove stories like that.
And that guy who reviewed, anon or some godamn fuck, someone should skin him alive and then pour a little vinegar on his body. That would make him stop being a fucking weasel and a sneak.
Don\'t let it get you down and keep up this freat story!
And that guy who reviewed, anon or some godamn fuck, someone should skin him alive and then pour a little vinegar on his body. That would make him stop being a fucking weasel and a sneak.
Don\'t let it get you down and keep up this freat story!
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good chapteer.its hard to get good hetero harry fics . Why is harry always saddled with the guys? keep up the good workl
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GREAT LORD! WHERE HAVE U BEEN MY WHOLE LIFE? UPDATE