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October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hyperbole you are fucking pathetic. How can you flame something you haven\'t even read?
You just wrote this crap based on the biased opinion of that idiot arianrhod, the guy who complains about out-of-character characters but ends up writing stupid fag-fics where Harry is blatatly gay. But I suppose a gay Harry, that has a Malfoy as his love interest isn\'t out-of-character for you is it?
Get a fucking live! And read before you flame!
You just wrote this crap based on the biased opinion of that idiot arianrhod, the guy who complains about out-of-character characters but ends up writing stupid fag-fics where Harry is blatatly gay. But I suppose a gay Harry, that has a Malfoy as his love interest isn\'t out-of-character for you is it?
Get a fucking live! And read before you flame!
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
-Do a threesome
-Make Harry shag tons of girls
-Turn Harry into a perverted porn freak
That\'s all I\'m asking for...
-Make Harry shag tons of girls
-Turn Harry into a perverted porn freak
That\'s all I\'m asking for...
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Harry isn\'t just a \"bad guy\" in this story-- he\'s an unrepentant rapist, and an all around bastard. And he\'s a sociopath to boot, since his attitude seems to be that sex is his *right*, and that nothing else matters. He doesn
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please just write your story and pay no attention to most reviewers, kay?
Sigh. For some reason everybody decided to start picking on you.
Sigh. For some reason everybody decided to start picking on you.
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loving it! Update!
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More!!!!
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not a review... V, if you don\'t want me sayihis his shit, feel free to delete it, but I feel the need to rant a bit...
Lyria & Arianrhod, I think the both of you need to get a life and look up, no better yet, call a lawyer and ask for the legal definition of rape, because nothing that has happened fits it. Hermione was hesitant and said no, but then said yes. No means no, but yes does not also mean no. She wasn\'t drugged, she wasn\'t going through some huge drama in her life, and they are the same age. It wasn\'t rape, end of story. Now You both say Harry raped Cho... whoa, slow down and explain. WTF? She was concenting the entire time, and being in pain doesn\'t magically make it rape.
And Arianrhod...lol. How the fuck can some one who writes fag shit complain about any author writing out of character? Guess what, Harry isn\'t gay! You know what? NO ONE is in canon! I guess we should all go through your fics flaming your stupid ass for writing fagfics. Harry becoming a womanizing asshole is a much more realistic concept (in canon context or in real life) than that shit you write. \"Oh, Lucius! You evil bastard Death Eater! Do me in the ass!\" Get a fucking clue.
Lyria & Arianrhod, I think the both of you need to get a life and look up, no better yet, call a lawyer and ask for the legal definition of rape, because nothing that has happened fits it. Hermione was hesitant and said no, but then said yes. No means no, but yes does not also mean no. She wasn\'t drugged, she wasn\'t going through some huge drama in her life, and they are the same age. It wasn\'t rape, end of story. Now You both say Harry raped Cho... whoa, slow down and explain. WTF? She was concenting the entire time, and being in pain doesn\'t magically make it rape.
And Arianrhod...lol. How the fuck can some one who writes fag shit complain about any author writing out of character? Guess what, Harry isn\'t gay! You know what? NO ONE is in canon! I guess we should all go through your fics flaming your stupid ass for writing fagfics. Harry becoming a womanizing asshole is a much more realistic concept (in canon context or in real life) than that shit you write. \"Oh, Lucius! You evil bastard Death Eater! Do me in the ass!\" Get a fucking clue.
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like the plot of the story, however, you should profread to check the spelling or whether certain paragraph make sense.
I think it is very understandable that Harry become addicted to sex. People seem to the take raping part as an offense so you should not do more and do casual encounterment only. Harry need a counsellor to help him with his problem.
Update :)
I think it is very understandable that Harry become addicted to sex. People seem to the take raping part as an offense so you should not do more and do casual encounterment only. Harry need a counsellor to help him with his problem.
Update :)
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn Harry\'s such a heartless bastard... He should get some sort of punishment!
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This has to be the worst smut fic I\'ve ever had the misfortune of reading.
You\'ve made Harry an uncaring, selfish bastard all the way through this.
In the first chapter, Harry rapes Hermione. In the second, Pansy damn near rapes Harry, and in the third, he rapes Cho.
With Hermione, she keeps trying to say no, and he still goes on. That\'s rape, my dear. Is it any wonder she\'s not friends with him anymore, and Ron punches him?
When he\'s with Cho, she\'s in obvious pain and bleg, ag, and he doesn\'t even care enough t het her suffering to try and relax her. And he doesn\'t stop either. That\'s rape again. Then she asks an innocent question and he just leaves her there, like an utter cad.
No wonder your story was removed from FF.net. It\'s nothing but a series of rapes. It\'s not smut in the least, or sexy.
Either you have no idea what a real sexual relationship involves, or you think that sex is inherently dirty and has to be forced on someone. But you seriously need to look at the way you write sex and the way you write your characters and consider what you\'re doing.
This is just terrible.
You\'ve made Harry an uncaring, selfish bastard all the way through this.
In the first chapter, Harry rapes Hermione. In the second, Pansy damn near rapes Harry, and in the third, he rapes Cho.
With Hermione, she keeps trying to say no, and he still goes on. That\'s rape, my dear. Is it any wonder she\'s not friends with him anymore, and Ron punches him?
When he\'s with Cho, she\'s in obvious pain and bleg, ag, and he doesn\'t even care enough t het her suffering to try and relax her. And he doesn\'t stop either. That\'s rape again. Then she asks an innocent question and he just leaves her there, like an utter cad.
No wonder your story was removed from FF.net. It\'s nothing but a series of rapes. It\'s not smut in the least, or sexy.
Either you have no idea what a real sexual relationship involves, or you think that sex is inherently dirty and has to be forced on someone. But you seriously need to look at the way you write sex and the way you write your characters and consider what you\'re doing.
This is just terrible.