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Ignore the rude reviewers Vortex. They obviouly don\'t know what rape is. Even if it is rape why are they complaining? This is adultfanfiction.net... It has tons of rape stories and most of them happen to be slash.

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Lyria: Who cares if Harry is a selfish bastard in this story. The author decides what Harry will be like and not you. If you don\'t want Harry to be a bastard then go write your own fanfiction. I think this is a much better smut then other story because at least it has a good storyline unlike some crappy plotless shit. And I don\'t think this story was removed from ff.net. Vortex moved it because he feels that it is more appropriate here with the NC-17 rating as he explained on ff.net.

Arianrhod: Like I said even if Harry is a rapist you have no say. It\'s Vortex\'s story and not your. Don\'t flame Vortex just because you don\'t like how he made Harry. I happen to like a bad ass Harry. If you don\'t like this fanfiction then strop reading it. Don\'t spend all your time complaining and putting Vortex down. It might be offensive to you but not other people. That is why it is a NC-17. If you can\'t take the offensive content then don\'t read it. NC-17 = Anything goes
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Chapter 3 was great. Harry was so heartless. I hope chapter 4 will be comming around soon.

WHy did you take out all the things that Harry, Ron, Hermione, and Draco were saying? that made the story much more fun to read, and they were funny. I think that you should put them back in. By the way, you sure changed that fast, i just read chapter one today, like at 4 this afternoon, and now at 12 there\'s more chapters, i see. But i think that the comments were a very good idea, and you should put them back into the story.

HOly shite. i just read all those reviews you got, geez, it looks like you\'ll have \'ta be watching your back, these people sound deranged! all well, i think that you should write whatever the hell you want, they are the ass holes that try to bring goood writers down, write what you like, post what you please, and tell those retarded bastards to FUCK OFF!

Everyone take a chill pill... Stop flaming each other...

There was a warning right before you read the first chapter stating that some people may find this story offensive because of rape... This author clearly knows about the offensive part, and consequently, there is a warning...

I happen to like this story because I find it very original... I can\'t find anything anher her Harry sexaholic fan fiction on the net... Harry is sad and needs relief so he finds the easy way out... Escape reality and how does he do it... Sex... I still believe Harry should get punished at the end but that\'s my opinion... This story does portrays a cruel Harry and some of you may argue that it is OOC... No body is going to to know how Harry turn out in the sixth year except Rowling... It\'s not likely Harry will turn into a cruel bastard but it is also not likely that Harry will turn homosexual and have snape become his biological father... But like you people said it is possible... Thus, the out of character subject should not be brought up since no one except J. K. Rowling can perfectly characterize Harry... All fan fictions are made up and do not need to be 100% \'in character\'... Let the author write whatever he or she wants... I you disagree then leave and don\'t spend all your time ranting and raving... Please, it\'s childish...

Fan fiction are for the purpose of entertainment and you people are making it like a war ground... Please stop... Let\'s stop the madness and let the story be... Some people like it and some people don\'t... If you disagree with the author\'s plots or viewpoints of the story then stop and exit... Simple as that and everyone can avoid a flame war....



Sometimes you need a little orginality in a fan fiction or else all stories will be practically the same... That\'s all I\'ve got to say... Update soon Vortex...
AGAIN TO PEOPLE WHO FIND THIS STORY OFFENSIVE BECAUSE OF RAPE... READ THE WARNING IN THE FIRST CHAPTER!!!

Ignore any flames you get. Especially from hypocrites.
To Arianrhod:
You really need to take a look at the garbage you write before criticizing another author for writing Harry Potter \"completely out of character, and for no reason\"

Arianrhod, your hypocracy is astounding. I take great comfort that your livejournal blah, blah, blah, and some other self rightious middle aged women agree that this is OOC and crap, really, and I think Vertex does too. I think 30 year old women obsessed with faggots, excuse me \"bi-sexuals\" (and you have the guts to pretend you have some moral ground to stand on; bi-sexuals... *rolleyes* fucking hippy) really are the best judge of fanfiction, since theirs is always the best... no, I mean most pretentiously written trash in fandom. I\'ll take 100 mary-sues written by preteen girls who can\'t spell over the shit you and your type write. Also note, your pep squad of self elected \'authorities\' on IC/OOCness and quality writing wouldn\'t know good writing if it beat the shit out of them with a stick and spit in their faces.

There is no proof homosexuality is genetic. For every study that says it is, there\'s another that says it\'s not. It\'s politically correct to label it genetic, but don\'t you dare try to put this out as some unquestionable fact.

Speaking of... FACT: Harry Potter is attracted only to girls. Harry is attracted to Cho, and not being a good kisser doesn\'t mean shit. Harry is NEVER attracted to ANY boy. Trust me, the books are from his perspective, we would know. It\'s not \'open to interpretation\'. It\'s canon fact, iron clad that Harry Potter is 100% heterosextual.

For the record, J.K. and WB DID try to go after sites to shut down slash stories (specifically) and has publicly stated her distaste for the disgusting trash. I\'m not sure why they stopped pursuing it (unenforcability would be my guess), but they\'ve made their stance clear. How you missed that and have been involved in fanfic is beyond me.

Oh, and for the record, we don\'t care how old you are (wisdom and age have been divorced for decades), most fanfic period is written by women, and we know that slash is a chick thing. A nasty, disgusting chick thing.

Anger is perfectly healthy, certainly more healthy than being a faggot. Or obsessing over faggots through fanfiction. You might be calm, but you were also wrong. Both in being a hypocrite, and for being a 30 fucking year old woman who doesn\'t know what the fuck rape is.

lol! i love it when people who have no clue about fanfic flame someone who does. \"in character\" and \"out of character\" don\'t just mean that a character is exactly like he is in the books. it means that their basic personality shows through he whe work. snape\'s a mean bastard, dumbledore\'s a bit of a loon, but nice, and a lot stronger than he appears, voldemort is ruthless and cunning and wants power, remus is a nice guy, sirius means well, but is too unstable...if you have those elements in a story, then the character is \"in character\". what arianrhod and lyria are saying is that in this story, harry is an asshole without any good reason for being an asshole, since in the books, he\'s a good kid. his personality here is a complete turnaround from normal, and there isn\'t any real explanation why. sirius dies and harry all of a sudden has to become a jerk and a rapist? makes no sense to me. and what does arianrhod writing slash have to do with anything? being gay isn\'t a character trait. it\'s genetic, so it\'s perfectly reasonable to suggest that harry or anyone else could still be the person they are, and be gay. besides, most slash in this fandom is far more interesting than the het stuff, since most of it is either boring mary sues or badly written. and yes, harry does rape both cho and hermione. anyone with any clue, or who\'s been date raped, like me, can see that clearly. hermione tries to fight harry, but he pulls her legs open. she tries to tell him no, but he cuts her off, and doesn\'t let her say no. he knows she doesn\'t really want him, because he says as much when he sees her looking at his dick. that\'s rape. and anyone who\'s ever actually had sex can see that cho is manipulated and raped. she\'s all tense and rigid, even when he goes to penetrate her. no one who\'s willing has body language like that. she\'s scared and hurting and in pain, and he doesn\'t give a shit. any caring partner would have seen shen\'tn\'t want to go any further, but he doesn\'t stop, even when her body clearly doesn\'t want to have sex. that\'s rape too. and both arianrhod and lyria are correct to show that, and flaming them for it is ridiculous.

*Is commenting to the other reviewers in support of the flamers*

Pathetic.

Someone *glances the author\'s way* writes a fic that features serial rape and people *like* it? And to add to that when someone decides to speak their mind and say they don\'t like it giving valid reasonings why they get counter-flamed for it citing their avocation in writing slash?

Lovely.

Just to point out, in OotP Harry isn\'t exactly enthusiastic in the relationship with Cho to the extent that the only way he can describe their one kiss is \"wet\". That still allows a great deal of leaway for making him gay or at least bi. Sure, I will acknowledge that JKR will never write him gay but until she goes Anne Rice on the fandom that will not stop fanfic writers speculating about the possiblity. I personally think it is possible to write Harry gay and still stay IC.

To Vertex: If you wish to persist with this fic no amont of those of us who think you\'re writing Harry cruel, callous and horribly OOC will stop you so go ahead, you\'re just adding to the world\'s terrible moral state.
I have also heard you intend to turn this fic Harry/Hermione and I have to say that after the first chapter only the daft idiots who think this fic is good would ever believe it credible that Hermione could ever forgive him but it\'s up to you whether you wish to ignore your critics and write a fic only the daft fools can find believable *shrugs*.

Oh and no, I didn\'t read the fic, I only read exerpts Arianrhod highlighted on a Live Journal Badfic community and her associated comments which, as you may have guessed, I agree with.

Good luck to you and your intelligence-deprived fans.

I never aproved of turning review messages into some kind of forum where people just try to beat each other, but after reading Hyperbole\'s message, this is where I draw the line.

First, whoever writes a fic has the right to make the characterbit bit OOC. Considering all the stuff Harry went through these last years, although I doubt he would go to such extremes, it is not to be ruled out entirely.

Second, you, and a lot of people like you, are greatly mistakioercoercion with force in Hermione\'s case; with Cho, I really can\'t see how anyone could even think about rape, since she was the one who told Harry she was ready.

Third, if you dont\' like the fic, don\'t read it. If you agree with the flames, kindly do so silently, without forcing your opinion on others. You stated that this wasn\'t a review, it was a message supporting this fic\'s flammers, so you shouldn\'t even have written it.

I find it unlikely for Harry to be gay, but that is, obviously open ground for discussion. But it seems to me as you are supporting Arianrhod, who complains about the characters being OOC, but only writes OOC characters himself. Even if Harry IS gay, I doubt he would take an interest in Snape or the Malfoys.

Lastly, try not to involve other reviewers in your rude comments. People do have the right to like this fic, it isn\'t abominable to like it, nor does contibute to the \"world\'s lousy moral state\" , or whatever nonsense you spat in your message, just because you say so. If you\'re so damn concerned about morality, stop reading stories in adultfanfiction.net. Also, stop reading Harry Potter books. There are some Evangelists who say it is immoral and evil you know? I\'m surprised you haven\'t joined one of those groups who buy Harry Potter books just gatheter ter and make a bonfire with them.

P.S.Dana\'s right, they are shmucks. And some of the things they let through...if people find THIS apalling, I could name one or two fics residing in ff.net that would make you vomit your lungs out.

PEOPLE!!! This is turning into an acid bath back and forth!!! Stop this and get on with the story, kay?

If you really have to complain about rape, review The Final Escape, also by Vertex, that includes Harry and Bellatrix getting \"friendly\" with each other.

If you really have to take out your anger at the world, don\'t read fanfiction. Get out of your computers, find yourselves a good-looking guy or girl, then join a gym where you can punch sand bags all day long until you\'re calmer. It works wonders for me, look at me, I\'m a man of peace, without anger and without pent-up sexual frustration, which seems to be a growing problem, particularly among this fic\'s reviewers. ;)

Remember Ghandi, people; non-violence is the solution ( even if you feel better beating the crap out of someone )