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October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You must understand that when a normal person reads a bad fan fiction they just leave and not give a page of disapproval and write an article on livejournal just to put the author down. That is uncalled for. I am not one of Vortex
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October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello SmutMan,
>When you refer to deluded, self-important
>When you refer to deluded, self-important
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October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I\'m ready to ignore them allright! I\'m tired of their bullshit and I just want to read my story. Unfortunately, I don\'t think Vertex will be able to update before next weekend.
Just a side note to B: never identify or show yourself in front of me in real life, or I swear that in the name of Aku Soku Zan, I will gatotsu your ass.
Just a side note to B: never identify or show yourself in front of me in real life, or I swear that in the name of Aku Soku Zan, I will gatotsu your ass.
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October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Badtingting, awful characterization, and awful sex. Even the formatting is bad. Learn how to write before you try sex scenes. This writer certainly isnprofproficient enough to handle basic transitions, much less emotions and sex.
Blah.
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October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I actually read the story and I didn\'t see any rape. Hermione was upset because she had made what was obviously a bad decision, but other than that I didn\'t see any evidence of rape. In any event, this is cheap smut. There\'s no plot, no purpse, just sticky keyboards....great.
While I\'m probably going to say more about tin tin the review I\'m going to write, I\'ll simply sum it up for the board rats and reviewers:
1.) No smut fic is worth making a fool of yourself. Some of you reviewers should remember that.
2.) To the person who thought that Draco\'s mother was a good candidate for Harry\'s basic instincts...what the fuck is wrong with you? Would you like Harry to get it on with *your* mother? (Please don\'t answer that question, I shudder to know the answer)
JustJust because someone writes slash does not put them in the same category as someone who writes smut. I\'ve seen slash stories that range from PG to NC-17. The last time I checked, smut had a far smaller rating range. Why? Because it was aimed at a much smaller (and older) audience. The same can\'t always be said for slash.
Most slash stories have storylines and plots while smut fics have \"arousing\" and \"graphic\" language for the sole purpose of allowing the author/reader to get off.
4.) If the flaming of people who didn\'t enjoy this story upsets you to the point where you need to justify your appreciation of smut...something is seriously wrong. This isn\'t your story. You liked it, but someone else didn\'t; deal with it.
I personally could careless what smartass remarks anyone has to say in response to this review. I probably won\'t respond. Considering this story isn\'t an out and out rape fic (yet), I\'m not going to go into my \"this is a cry for help\" mode. I\'m just going to let it go.
While I\'m probably going to say more about tin tin the review I\'m going to write, I\'ll simply sum it up for the board rats and reviewers:
1.) No smut fic is worth making a fool of yourself. Some of you reviewers should remember that.
2.) To the person who thought that Draco\'s mother was a good candidate for Harry\'s basic instincts...what the fuck is wrong with you? Would you like Harry to get it on with *your* mother? (Please don\'t answer that question, I shudder to know the answer)
JustJust because someone writes slash does not put them in the same category as someone who writes smut. I\'ve seen slash stories that range from PG to NC-17. The last time I checked, smut had a far smaller rating range. Why? Because it was aimed at a much smaller (and older) audience. The same can\'t always be said for slash.
Most slash stories have storylines and plots while smut fics have \"arousing\" and \"graphic\" language for the sole purpose of allowing the author/reader to get off.
4.) If the flaming of people who didn\'t enjoy this story upsets you to the point where you need to justify your appreciation of smut...something is seriously wrong. This isn\'t your story. You liked it, but someone else didn\'t; deal with it.
I personally could careless what smartass remarks anyone has to say in response to this review. I probably won\'t respond. Considering this story isn\'t an out and out rape fic (yet), I\'m not going to go into my \"this is a cry for help\" mode. I\'m just going to let it go.
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October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That didn\'t turn me on, was it supposed to?
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October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i know this is supposed to be like full on sex but at least he had to have fetl something for her! i still think she\'s the best one.
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October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dear B ( that\'s a very imaginative name, btw )
Are you a fucking moron?
After we almost made those two pricks Arianrhod and Hyperbole ( who flamed this story without reading it - he jusoughought he had to agree with Arianrhod )shut up you had to bring this shit up again? Kindly do the world a favor and go shoot yourselfthe the head.
Of course I\'m right Oreo ;) I always am Lol
And MaidenMasherV, thanks again, you\'re the best!!!
Are you a fucking moron?
After we almost made those two pricks Arianrhod and Hyperbole ( who flamed this story without reading it - he jusoughought he had to agree with Arianrhod )shut up you had to bring this shit up again? Kindly do the world a favor and go shoot yourselfthe the head.
Of course I\'m right Oreo ;) I always am Lol
And MaidenMasherV, thanks again, you\'re the best!!!
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October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
To SlytherinDamian:
You say Arianrhod does not know what rape is? So you are saying this fic is *not* rape? More fool you then!
I may of course be wrong about this, I have never claimed to be an authority in much in life but I thought JKR was against NC-17 fanfics of her work on a whole, not just slash. I\'m sure that if she read Vertex\'s fic she would be disgusted and appalled too. From what I heard she did not like the idea of adult material based on her work being available for underage readers to access - het or slash.
As for the C&Ds, they had their effect on the fandom, most archives now have password systems set up and frankly it\'s probably damn lucky JKR hasn\'t made any more moves to k dok down on fanfiction again because this site would be a major casualty if she did.
To recap my statement: JKR is not against slash alone, she is against *ALL* adult material and this fic would go down all too quickly if she ever saw it. It\'s rape, to bones about it.
Vertex: My pity to you that you must endure a flamewar on your review page but the fact thou rou refused to see that you wrote rape is one of the reasons for it.
You say Arianrhod does not know what rape is? So you are saying this fic is *not* rape? More fool you then!
I may of course be wrong about this, I have never claimed to be an authority in much in life but I thought JKR was against NC-17 fanfics of her work on a whole, not just slash. I\'m sure that if she read Vertex\'s fic she would be disgusted and appalled too. From what I heard she did not like the idea of adult material based on her work being available for underage readers to access - het or slash.
As for the C&Ds, they had their effect on the fandom, most archives now have password systems set up and frankly it\'s probably damn lucky JKR hasn\'t made any more moves to k dok down on fanfiction again because this site would be a major casualty if she did.
To recap my statement: JKR is not against slash alone, she is against *ALL* adult material and this fic would go down all too quickly if she ever saw it. It\'s rape, to bones about it.
Vertex: My pity to you that you must endure a flamewar on your review page but the fact thou rou refused to see that you wrote rape is one of the reasons for it.
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October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hyperbole:
Some say it is a rape and other say it isn\'t. Let\'s just leave it at that. No more arguing. This story has warning stating that some people may classify the Hermione episode as a rape. I don\'t think you should change his viewpoint just because of what you think. It the same as my feelings toward the HP livejournal fandom; I don\'t agree with what most people say and do there but I don\'t act on my feelings because I know I can cause anger and frustration in some degree.
People let\'s drop the rape topic and stop the flaming...
Some say it is a rape and other say it isn\'t. Let\'s just leave it at that. No more arguing. This story has warning stating that some people may classify the Hermione episode as a rape. I don\'t think you should change his viewpoint just because of what you think. It the same as my feelings toward the HP livejournal fandom; I don\'t agree with what most people say and do there but I don\'t act on my feelings because I know I can cause anger and frustration in some degree.
People let\'s drop the rape topic and stop the flaming...