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I want to strangle Harry right now... Update

I love Cheap and Sleazy stories like this... Nice chapter... Luna is a grade A slut...

I loved this chapter (sorry I forgot to review it while responding to Hyperbole). I hope you remember Katie Bell has graduated when you write the next chapter. I recommend you have her as a reserve on a professional Quidditch team and Harry meets up with her on a Hogsmeade weekend or she\'s visiting the school or something because being a reserve means she has a lot of free time.

I just feel that the cho chang this was a tad insensitive on harry\'s part.I mean he\'s like a jerk almost a sirius eh? I hope the ending will be great, lets not make it h/hr but h/cc? I mean h/hr is done so much these days..and ginny is just unthinkable. But the story really lacks a plot, its just smut all the way

WoW! Great chapter... Can\'t wait for the next... Is Harry going to have a threesome with Lavender and Pavarti?

Asweome story! cant wait for katie bell! You toatally need to have them do it on the wuidditch field after practice then get caught by mcgoncal!!!!cant wait for the next chapter!!

Hyperbole- I\'m not sure I understand the point of what you\'re saying. I\'ve never read the other chicks fic, but my problem is with the hypocracy more than peoples opinion of what constitutes rape. How she handles rape in her stories has no impact on the inherant unfairness of writing slash, and then blasting someone elses fic for being \'OOC\'.

Rape, sexual assault, crimes in general aren\'t a black or white issue all the time anyways. If anything, that makes Vertex\'s handling better, because it\'s treated as something that is more realc inc in most cases (the uncertainty of it all) than in the other chick\'s fic (if indeed, it\'s handled as \'Rape is rape\' and went no deeper). And let\'s be honest, this story is a set up for massive amounts of smut, as the title, summary, etc clearly indicated. It\'s not like anyone should be clicking on the story thinking \'Boy, this is going to be deep!\'

And there are plenty of ppl who think rape would be out of character, but enjoy it anyways. Rape fantasies are as old as rape itself, and both men and women have them. I\'m not saying it\'s for everyone, but your standard (which I don\'t disagrith)ith) that you are applying to slash, works here as well. Obviously, Vertex wasn\'t aiming for it to be considered a rapefic, I\'m just saying...

I love it... I see that Katie Bell is Harry\'st vit victim... Is Harry going to do it in the open field? If he is, he is sure brave... Chapter 4 is great... Update ASAP...

Well like my nick over there I love smut(tough Harry & Hermione smut is the best!)so this is going well.I dont believe it that people are getting mad just because of this fic.HEY IT IS FANFICTION FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!IF YOU DONT LIKE IT,STOP READING it!This last chapter was really OC,but as you\'ve said,we dont know nothing about the charactsex sex lifes and desires so all can do anything they want(altough I really dont believe Harry would be gay or become a heartless bastard rapist...)But like i\'ve already said,this is fanfiction,so get along or keep out.Crazy to see the next chapter!