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Great job, man! Can\'t wait to see it updated! Harry needs a bloiw job!

Well, Susan\'s next! Can;t wait for that as we hardly ever get to see her in the books. I wonder what you\'ll do with her. Update soon! I\'m on the edge of my seat!

Please update this story! I can\'t wait to see Harry fuck Susan! Altho, I always pictured Susan as kinda fat. Oh well, more chushion for the pushin!!

Oh God, please update! this is so hot! Hermione should walk in on Harry screwing a girl or something! Please hurry and update! I lemon-scented luv ya!

Great story! lovin every chapter! u gotta hurry up and update this man! oh, and harry should go into some bar in hogsmeade and pick up a completely new chick and do her. thatd be totally sweet. just a hot, sweaty, one-night stand between him and some stranger. and make her like, this really hot and experienced forty year old. one of those chicks thats really hot at forty and also really experienced sexually. thats always really hot. its one of my fantasies as a sixteen year old. make her look like demi moore. and she should know hes like only sixteen or seventeen but not care cuz she just wants him for a one-night stand, maybe teach him a few tricks. this could be soooo hot! man, u gotta d! h! hot, middle-aged, experienced chilikelike demi moore are the best!!!!

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Good story, really hot and funny. My only problem is that the whole thing with Hermione does seem a bit like rape. Sorry for bringing it up again as there has already been a huge argument over it.:) Just looks that way to me. As the public service announcement goes: If you don\'t stop when you know she doesn\'t want to, you\'re no better than a rapist. In fact, you are a rapist.

Please update! Please!

PLEASE update! I love this story!

This story could have so much more depth to it than it actually does. Instead, it\'s just like some dumb porno. But, I suppose that was your intent...