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January 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
To be honest the first chapter was not rape what so ever she consented to having sex. if you think that to be rape then I'm guessing that you believe all sex with a guy is rape and I think you need to have your head checked.
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Vertex, you just keep on writing, okay? Harry's actions are despicable, but there are a lot of people who want to read that kind of Harry, and you are delivering to them well. I mean, why the hell would someone see that a story contains borderline N/C, and then go and whine and complain about it? That is like me, a non-slash-reader, going to a fucking Mpreg and ranting on about how damn messed up that is.
I mean, rape is wrong. To other reviewers reading this, you dont need to point it out again and again. If you dont like what is happening, then dont read (and honestly, there is a fine line between raping and being very persuasive without force). I didnt like how Harry used some of the girls, but you know what? Your a great writer, and it is my choice to read. You arent holding up a damn rape scene in front of my face and forcing me to observe it. I am choosing to read a story that I know will be filled with sex. Lots of people are choosing to read your story and the majority are liking it.
To all the flamers, get a fucking clue. Dont like, dont read.
I mean, rape is wrong. To other reviewers reading this, you dont need to point it out again and again. If you dont like what is happening, then dont read (and honestly, there is a fine line between raping and being very persuasive without force). I didnt like how Harry used some of the girls, but you know what? Your a great writer, and it is my choice to read. You arent holding up a damn rape scene in front of my face and forcing me to observe it. I am choosing to read a story that I know will be filled with sex. Lots of people are choosing to read your story and the majority are liking it.
To all the flamers, get a fucking clue. Dont like, dont read.
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good. More please, and by the way it's Ginevra Weasley not Virginia Weasley.
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yo whats the go. its been ages since u updated this fic... and i want more... please...
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, Harry sure is a dick and you don't try to excuse him for it....otherwise, it's pretty good far as smut goes. Seems a bit repetitive at times though, but then that's smut and Pwp I guess.
I'm not sure, but are you loading text files or copy pasting...I might recommend latter as the story gets truncated and is hard to read unless you view in full screen mode.
I'm not sure, but are you loading text files or copy pasting...I might recommend latter as the story gets truncated and is hard to read unless you view in full screen mode.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, please continue...
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, please continue...
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER OR I WILL STOP READING YOUR STORIES AND MAKE SURE NO ONE ELSE STARTS TO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT WILL JUST BE AS DISAPPOINTING FOR THEM AS TO ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry\'s not evil, he was actually being normal for the firat time in his life. THe majority of guys his age tend to use girls. Harsh, but true I\'m afraid.