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by Shiv5468

person Rilla
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe.
person Deb >^..^<
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOOPS indeed;-) This was FABULOUS!!! Well I guess she now has her way, Albus knows... What will he say? Can\'t wait to see*
person Jenny
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Shiv, darling, much as I love your stories, I\'m *very* glad I didn\'t read chapter 2 until chapter 3 was there as well ...! That would have been too traumatic for me to handle - I\'d have been chewing the carpets.

As it is, that little bitty has provided the perfect end to a tough-if-enjoyable day (on the one hand, Advanced Fluid Dynamics, arg, arg, arg. On the other, gorgeous Greeks to ogle - a much-beloved boyf doesn\'t mean I can\'t look, does it?). Marvellous. I\'m glad you\'ve got Disapproving!Albus, too - I do find that more plausible. Is this where we get the Plot bit?

Oh - and I want more Bubble Bath! *And* more Dirty Deeds! Sod the ironing, girl, get wrg! Tg! Tip - instead of ironing things, pull them flat before hanging them up - a good firm stretch while wet gets rid of a lot of the creases. :)
person Talene
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Are you going to have Albus sack Sev? I hope not.
person Helena
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hu, Hu!!This is getting very intersting and sooooooooooooooooooooo excitting!!!!
i\'m dying for more and more and more...................
person Deb >^..^<
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP!!! What an evil way to leave us hanging!!! This was WOW!!! I really would like MORE, no, MUST HAVE MORE!!!
Deb >^..^<
person Rilla
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! Do you have a little vampire in you? Not yet. Oh my gosh, I\'m laughing so hard at that. It just made my night.
person Soggie
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes,get caught!! Or maybe get it on in front of the gang while under an invisibility charm....
person Soggie
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes,get caught!! Or maybe get it on in front of the gang while under an invisibility charm....
person Soggie
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes,get caught!! Or maybe get it on in front of the gang while under an invisibility charm....

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