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by Shiv5468

person tamargrl
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dammit! How could you leave it there? How could you? Argh! Writers! If it\'s any consolation, you don\'t need no stinkin\' cliff-hanger ending to get us hooked. :)
person tigress
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nice bit of smut! With fun and games thrown into the mix. Wonder what Albus will say, opps indeed! :) Can\'t wait till the next chappy of this little feel good story!
until then,
much love
tigress
person sam
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love this one! Humor goes well, just enough; H. very self-assured, Snape honest but captivated. Looking forward to more!
person lizski
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Evil. Absolutely evil, I tell you! *grin
person Loraine
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You evil, evil writer! I demand that you begin writing immediately! NOW! I will not abide your back talk. Get to work. I expect a full parchment!

(Please?)
person Talene
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
An excellent first two chapters! How do you plan roceroceed? i will be eagerly looking for updates!!
person celticwitch
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this! It\'s very witty and well written. *APPLAUSE*
person Andrian
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
enjoyable fun smut....sigh just what I needed
person Daya
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! The cheesy lines were fab! Am giggling so much here.

\'playing find the wand\'..oh Severus, you little demon you!

MOre, more! Bravo, bravo! *showers Shiv with roses*

*shakes thang*

Daya
person lemon_picker
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know, for all the squickiness and slight OOC-ness, this fic is really very very FUN. I LOVED the Kama Sutra descriptions and Snape\'s totally brainless reaction (\"What? Where am I? Who\'m I kissing...\"), not to mention Hermione\'s no-holds-barred approach to foreplay. I didn\'t know whether to squirm or laugh, so I did both. Hahah, bravo, dahling! Do hope you\'ll continue with this delightful yarn :)