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by Shiv5468

person Temptation
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just had to let you know that I have soooo enjoyed seeing Hermione turned loose on Snape. I hope you can take it further - I\'ve had a few good chuckles with it.
I just wanted to add to the \"Chip Butty\" Here in New Jersey,USA I\'ve always called a Chip Buddy and it is: potato chips (any flavor) put on a sandwich made from any deli meat on supermarket bread. I have two favs\" ham, american cheese,mayonaisse and barbecue flavored chips or sour cream and onion chips. The other favorite is bologna, am cheese, mustard and the chips.

Keep writing Shiv, I\'ve enjoyed reading.
person Jenny
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Oh, that\'s lovely!!

One tiny hint - if you can reformat so the ending\'s more obvious and people don\'t make the mistake of reading the A/N thinking it\'s more story ...

Yay! That\'s a lovely story! Now finish the Bubble Bath and Dirty Deeds!
person Rosmerta
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a fantastic ending! I loved Severus\'s thoughts in the last few paragraphs. You\'ve done such a terrific job of showing how they\'re perfect for each other. \"Hermione taming\" indeed! :) This whole story was just delightful. I think this one ended in just the right place, so I don\'t exactly want more of this one, but I sure hope you write more of this type!!
person LadySnape
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I must say I haven\'t heard of a chip butty till now, but damn it sounds delicious. I am now hankering to go get some bread and chips, thank you for the great idea. I am loving this so far by the way...lol.
person buttercup
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying reading it. If you\'re enjoying writing it why not continue? I didn\'t start out as a Snape afficianado but I like the way you write him and he\'s growing on me.
person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!! Hermione is one tough cookie;-) I for one would LOVE it if you took them into the next phases of their lives....
Wedding (complete with a smut filled honeymoon), children, whatever else you desire!!! Hoping you will continue, Deb >^..^<
person ya
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Point 1 - it\'s Voldemort, not Voldermort.

Point 2 - Ron didn\'t study Arithmanct.

Point 3 - this story is great. I *love* your Hermione! She\'s wonderful - just what I wish I could be! I can see how Canon!Hermione could be this person by the end of the series, too, so it\'s well in character. And, indeed, I suspect JKR would love this Hermione, too. :)
person Michele
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your Hermione. I would love to read more about these two - scenes of later years? Hope that you continue.
Michele
person Rilla
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How absolutely sweet! I love the bit about Ron saying she\'s scarier than Voldemort!
person DawnEB
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have thoughroughly enjoyed your story, your writing style, your \'in character\' charactization, and your sense of humour. I\'ve been reading a lot of HP fan fic of late, and although I have often felt I should review, never had. What makes you so special? The chip butty! Oh, how I agree with you, my mouth waters as I think of yoescrescription. This is my favourite, but sadly infrequent, way of eating chips. I sometimes use white, crusty bread cut thick, with the yolk of a fried egg drizzled over the chips, but then this is actually an egg and chip butty, so you will have to forgive my little abberation.

Keep up the good work!