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November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok here\'s the persuasion....please please please do another chapter! or several! please! *gets down on knees* you know it\'ll be fun!
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November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The Breakfast chapter: This caught me
off guard when Harry and Ron announced
their bet. Well done! And for Harry to
tell Severus that Hermione needed someone
to take care of her was so - aww! - sweet.
I love how Hermione handled Albus. I never
pictured her bullying him but bravo, you did
it! And for Severus to get all the perks and
the DADA position! Love it!
And to top it all off, Severus is not running away!
Hugs,
Corazon
off guard when Harry and Ron announced
their bet. Well done! And for Harry to
tell Severus that Hermione needed someone
to take care of her was so - aww! - sweet.
I love how Hermione handled Albus. I never
pictured her bullying him but bravo, you did
it! And for Severus to get all the perks and
the DADA position! Love it!
And to top it all off, Severus is not running away!
Hugs,
Corazon
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November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was thoroughly amused by the whole experience that was \'Celebration.\' Personally, I\'d say leave it to end where it currently does (i.e. chapter 5). It\'s a very lovely ending, if a bit sappy.
Thank you ever so much for explaining to us heathens what a chip butty is. That was highducaducational. :)
Thank you ever so much for explaining to us heathens what a chip butty is. That was highducaducational. :)
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November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh PLEASE don\'t stop there! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don\'t stop! I\'m begging you now, do you know how demoralising that is? But still, i am begging you not to stop! PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASE!
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How does one properly beg for more? I adore this story. I would love to see more vignettes of the celebrations of their lives together. Well Done!!! If this is not proper begging, I will do what I have to.
Mary Kay
Mary Kay
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brillant.....your story was interesting, and I really want to know what happens next....
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! Hope you post an epilogue.
Not sure I\'ll be trying your snack anytime soon though.
Maybe sometime when I\'m feelinuly uly adventurous.
Mari-Sue
Not sure I\'ll be trying your snack anytime soon though.
Maybe sometime when I\'m feelinuly uly adventurous.
Mari-Sue
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
heheehehe! I quite frankly love this story and I can see Herm as being exactly that bossy, pushy and self assured! By all means.....please continue! LOL
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really think it should end just where it is. Very sweet- just perfect for what it is, a nice fluffy happy ending. And who doesn\'t like one of those now and then?
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! Shiv, I am really loving this! The whole thing so far is just great! You make me happy I issued this challenge! That last bit wherepe wpe was thinking that Hermione was magnificent was just the sweetest thing! I can\'t wait for the next installment! Update soon!