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by Shiv5468

person Sadie Hyde
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this - I love all your stories- the way you write Hermione is just brilliant- Dirty Deeds I and II had me collapsed with laughter. It\'s great to read something that\'s so sexy and smart and funny all at the same time. You rock.
person BakaChan
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know how to go about convincing you to write more but would me getting down on bended knee and begging do any good..... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE??????
person LilyMalfoy
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. While I wouldn\'t mind reaing more, I think it ended just right. No need to force more chapters.
person magdellin
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is so excellent. I\'m glad that you linked it after it was finished... although that may have just been dumb luck on my behalf that the only completed story I\'ve found in about a week has been yours. w00t? :)

No, it was really funny, and really good; and made somewhat ironic because I\'m out of breakfast foods, so I\'m eating salt and vinegar crisps for breakfast. Not. Cool. But yeah, it\'s all good.

I really liked your story, and the characterisations especially. The \'why would I run?\' line was gorgeous. And the Harry-Ron-Sev table conversation was brilliant.
person LadyPeregrine
schedule November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is so cute! The characters are slightly OOC, but it\'s permissable in this instance. I luvs this story! Good job!
person SJ
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Utterly charming and a very nice read, indeed. You are completely right about the chip butty, I find chippy chips are best and somtimes add a little curry sauce. Lovely.

I do hope you write more.
person sinj
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Would like to see it continued. Keep it up with the other ones too! By the way I agree with you on the chip butty lecture, but you did fail to mention that the bread / roll should be buttered, NOT with margerine, buth pth proper butter so that it melts onto the chips thus adding a pleasant savoury moisture to the butty, otherwise it would be too dry.
person dementres
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
no, the end?, it needs at least one more chap. tell of his courtship and i would love to see the reaction of the rest of the group to what dumbledore agreed too
person Stellar Snape
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic! What a wonderful ending. Just fluffy enough to bring a watery smile to my face, yet just naughty enough to make me laugh evilly and smirk (although I will never claim to smirk as well as Sev). Excellent!!!
person tbj
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, please write more! This is perhaps the funniest and most honest representation of a SS/HG fling I\'ve read. She would most definitely wear the pants in the relationship, or at least try. Perhaps just an epilogue as a compromise. Hogwarts needs a new Potion Mistress doesn\'t it? :-)