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for Celebration

by Shiv5468

person kate
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooooo, goody! simple, straightforward and the promise of smut in the next chapter. keep posting, please, i\'ve enjoyed round one...
person snarkysnape
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great start!!! prettyase ase keep going?! you must!!!
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person Roman
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Even if there\'s no smut next chapter, it\'ll have been a very nice ficlet. :)
person GeekGoddess
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh please please please write more....that was a wonderful first chapter....and I would love to see this story continue for at least 4 more chapters...the smut, being caught, the ramifications of no protection, discovering that they are in love and off course the happy ending.....great story.....I loved it.
person Sus
schedule January 17, 1920 at 12:00 AM
Evil, evil cliffhanger!! But this story is a riot. As for them getting caught.....the idea of it is more exciting than actually getting caught. Or maybe that is just me LOL Thanks for the great story!