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for That Burning Feeling

by TheWhiteQueen

schedule December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wtf. Lmao! Poor Marcus. He should have just stopped being stubborn and gone to Pomfrey. XD
person Idryl
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor poor Marcus! I found it quite *amusing* I made a friend of mine who had an infection read it. She said that it was quite alike (even if it was not what I wanted to hear). But when you said that he had a shag with Penelope it made me think poor poor Percy. He must have caught it too.
I\'ve read all your others fics. I LIKE IT hope to read one another soon!! ;)
person moo
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, I was uncomfortable for him!
person bbn
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person webba
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God.

This was one of the funniest things I\'ve read in a long, long time. I hurt with Marcus, that\'s the honest to god\'s truth. I almost lost it when he put the applicator where he did. And then, after all that pain and torture, he ends up cumming all over the place and going straight back to square one.

The biggest crit I would have with this is sometimes the paragraphing was a little strange. Other than that, hilarious!

~webba