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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story!! I am so glad he took the initiative in Ch2 to go to her room, and she took the initiative in Ch 3 to invite him to her place. Am also glad they didn\'t waste any time denying their attraction to each other. Amazing what kind of things \"wall flowers\" do when no one is watching them! Thank you for posting!!
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ha, very nice PWP. I enjoyed the story a lot.
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December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Muah. *wipes drool off the keyboard*
First chapter-- Oh. My. God. That was the fucking best smut I think I\'ve ever read. Hotness right there.
Second chapter-- Couldn\'t live up to the first.
Wheeew. *fans herself* *pulls out a garden hose* This is for you dearihosehoses Corazon down* I just don\'t know how you do it. ^_^
First chapter-- Oh. My. God. That was the fucking best smut I think I\'ve ever read. Hotness right there.
Second chapter-- Couldn\'t live up to the first.
Wheeew. *fans herself* *pulls out a garden hose* This is for you dearihosehoses Corazon down* I just don\'t know how you do it. ^_^
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November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a great little story. Thanks.
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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh well done! I went and read the third chapter on http://www.lordandladysnape.net/viewstory.php?sid=558&i=1 as well. I loved it! I\'m a romantic at heart, so was very pleased to see it all come together. Thank you for a wonderful reading experience.
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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH!!! That was so fabulous! I loved all of it! All 3 chapters were just so fantastic! I wish I could write like this! *sigh* And chapter 3!!!! Are you going to pot het here? It\'s so wonderful! I almost cried it was so wonderful!!! Thank you so much for answering my challenge! I couldn\'t have been more pleased!
Hugs,
Ness
Hugs,
Ness
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November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I\'m speechless. Great fic ;)
Well, now I would love to read about the next celebration (yeah, a stupid excuse to read more PWP with our sexy Potion Master)... please!
Well, now I would love to read about the next celebration (yeah, a stupid excuse to read more PWP with our sexy Potion Master)... please!
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November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg, i love your storys.
this was not different, great job.
i hope to a sequel.
linthal
this was not different, great job.
i hope to a sequel.
linthal
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October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that is wrfulrful!!!!
but could you maybe carry on with it?
turn it into a longer fic?
it would be interesting to see the relationship develope from just that one night.
and it would be fun if severus kept up the chasing and teasing game dont you think?
let me know if you are going to carry on with this please.
SHELL..
but could you maybe carry on with it?
turn it into a longer fic?
it would be interesting to see the relationship develope from just that one night.
and it would be fun if severus kept up the chasing and teasing game dont you think?
let me know if you are going to carry on with this please.
SHELL..
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm yummy.....