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by Teda

person Lizzie
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, i managed to miss about three updates cos my net connection was playing up, so once i managed to log on, i had the nice surprise of loads of chapters waiting! Excellent updates as ever, and i don\'t think i can stand the suspense of the cliffie on the last chapter, so update double quick......pleeeeaaaseeee!
person dragonlady sakura
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see Angie\'s mom come around, though her dad is still an ass. Everything was nice and waffy good.
person Lil Kimmi
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Two thumbs up! More please.
person cofaym
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to note that there is an error in Chapter 4. You do not \"take the quaffle\" to win a game of quidditch - you take the Snitch. However, the story itself is marvelous so far and I must continue reading now. Just wanted to let you know.
person Anita Coffee
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh!!!!! your beta needs to look closer at grammar and spelling but outside of the technical stuff i love this! it\'s getting so intense!
person Excel
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Helluva intense chappie. Poor Angelina and Fred. I KNOW you wouldn\'t kill her off (I\'d strangle you if you did) but what about her baby?!!! Update pronto, please.
person ara
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You @#$%^!! What about Angelina and the baby?! Cliffhangers are the cruelest invention in the world. Ahhhh, you must update.
person mint
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
(Screams) What the fuck? Is Angelina going to miscarriage? That would suck royally. Okay, put out the next chapter with the quickness, okay?
person Yawning (not logged in)
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Teda, you fiend! ^_^

I\'ll review here and at FFN. So al I can say is terrific story. One of the best. Besides, there aren\'t enough F/A fics out there.
person deblovesdragon
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Not the baby!
Well, maybe her parents will see her now. Or at l her her mother.
Keep writing.