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for Colorblind

by Teda

person ara
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Puberty sucks and I should know, I\'m still suffering flashbacks. ^O^
person Yawn
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lee and Katie are finally a couple! About time. The whole bit with them and Sharon was sweet. Him all panicked was funny, especially since he had no idea what to do. Typical male. Update soon. =)
person Lil Kimmi
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good everyone is properly hooked up, except poor Oliver. Get that boy a gal! Or guy. Heh,. L.
person dragonlady sakura
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this was funny. All the jokes about puberty do bring back memories. *Shudders* Kidding. I loved the friendship the girls share and the little interlude with Fred and George was cute. As for Anthony, I hope the kids plan works. Angelina making up with her dad would be cool. Although she should make him gr fir first! =)
person WriterLady1031
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It\'s very creative-- I would have never thought of Angelina as being black, but I suppose that the books don\'t give a description of her either way. The story is definitely on point about how her parents would react about bringing home a white guy-- some of my family members would be off the hook like that too if I brought home a white guy, luckily my parents aren\'t a trip like that (they\'re actually like Molly and Arthur Weaseley, just non-magical! ^_^). Anyway, everything about the story is great right down to Angelina expecting twins-- that\'s so cute. I hope you you continue with this story and I look forward to anything else you\'ve got up on this site.

Ciao! ^_^
person VeryPure
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 and 12 were terrific. I really like the way this story is going and the characterization is wonderful. Real issues and romance-a good combination. Curious what the little boy is plotting? Anthony is a cool little kid. I bet he brings his family together again. I hope!
person Lil Kimmi
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just keep doing what you\'ve been doing! Colorblind is the bomb. =)
person mint
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Claps hangs in relief* I was soooo thrilled Angelina made up with one of her parents....and that you didn\'t kill her off or the babies. Love the twins idea! And the highlight was Natasia slapping the shit out of George. He really did deserve it. Colorblind is my type of story.
person Excel
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVE CH. 11/12. AWESOME STORY. YOU MUST, MUST KEEP WRITING.
person ara
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Two updates! Yeah, and they were great. I was really worried for Angelina there for a moment. Thought you\'d pull an old miscarriage bit. Thankfully you didn\'t. Loved the confrontation with Fred and Angelina against her parents. Nice scene. Hopefully the father will check a clue soon. ^_^