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An excellent chapter. And a perfect first kiss- not to much, not too little. Well done! Smiles, Emmy

Is soooo very nice! I like dis story! Write more? Pwease??

WOO HOO! This story is simply GORGEOUS! You\'ve captured Snape beautifully... I love reading stories with alternating perspectives (You don\'t feel as much... static... I guess that\'s the best way I can phrase it). Keep up the fabulous work!

Hmmmm...Poor, poor Sevvie..My heart bleeds for him...really, there is blood everywhere..dripping on my keyboard as I type... *wipes blood from keyboard and licks finger* hmm...tastes strangley familiar...sweet, fruity, mild tannin...Ahhh..*opps*.. Shiraz ...*blushes*... Fear I may be giving the impression I am an alcoholic...simply not true...But I digress...

Another wonderful entry...Am most pleased with the interaction taking place

I hope this review serves to submit my intention to plead for the next update soon...

Thank you

Shem xxx

This is very good. I\'ve very impressed. Keep it coming! :) Emmy

I really enjoy it how you show Severus to actually have a human side!!! In light of what happened his mean side wouldn\'t have been appropriate!!! I am hoping that he will be able to see with his heart as well as his eyes & realize that he is not a rock, but a human who needs a human touch!!! Will be watching for your next update!!! Deb >^..^<

I like your story. I don\'t like some of the Sev/Hermione stories that are out there, but I like this one. Keep up the good work.

YEAH! GOOD! WONDERFUL! This is a great story, I\'m quivering in antici......................PATION! Update soon!

::sniff sniff:: That was perfect! I feel compelled to pull Sev from your fic to comfort him, but seeing as though that isn\'t possible, I will have to do with the Sev whose lap I am currentloy sitting on while I write this *evil grin* No..I am not insane...despite the rumours that circulate! It\'s a lie I say...Here I\'ll prove it

\"Sev, say something nice to the nice author\"

\"No.\"

...Sorry I tried..really I did...

Loved this chapter...keep it up..anxiously awaiting the next installment...soon I hope???

In the mean ti sha shall just have to find interesting ways to occupy my time with...I am sure sev will come up with something..

\"hmmmmm\"

Much respect
Shem xxx

Plenty of SS/HG fics are structured around an unfortunate potions accident, but you\'ve managed to put your own stamp on the idea. I like the fact that you\'ve made Sev the primary victim here, since it makes for very interesting drama and character development to have his customarily arrogant self-assurance stripped away (hopefully just temporarily). Sounds like he\'s in for a long and difficult haul to get back to his fighting form. Liking Hermione as Pomfrey\'s successor. Looking forward to updates!