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by SnapesDream

person kate
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i\'m hoping for more \'dates\' too -- and in the very near future! please update soon.
person shemhamforash
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice continuation
looking forward to the next

Shem
person lilyadar
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A splendid piece of work! Hmmm a date eh? Please update soon dear...
person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Harry has some real issues that he\'d better get out SOON!!! Sounds like Severus is having a hard time not getting nervous when he talks to Hermione;-) With her helping him getting over his potion brewing problems he will have lots of time to let them get better aquainted!!! Will you be sharing more about what happened to the boy with the spinal injury? I think what happens to him will play a big role in Severus\' recovery. Will be waiting for your next update*
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
tee-hee! Sounds so cute! LOL I am enjoying this very much and looks forwrad to updates. I know I am not saying much in the way of substance but I want to encourage and to praise yet, I don\'t have that much to say either. Great story!
person Fish
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwww... little nervous sevvie-kins

i love the way this is all unfurling...

more soon pleeease!

ciao,
Fish
person red
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more.. please!! i love it. .usually snape is this horrible \"greasy git\",. in this he you can see he is human and subject to the usual human ailments, vunerability and doubt.. it is a nice change please update soon!!!
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story! I love it....please keep writing on it?
person Deb >^..^<
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really do like the way that you worked in the kiss!!! I also like the way that they 2nd guess themselves & each other... looking right past the thought that they may actually have enjoyed it;-) I\'m looking forward to seeing how he handles his classes & his feelings.... til next chapter*
person Bindi
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Meow! Sev can throw me down and kiss me anyday!Nice chappie...