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for Doubts and Desires

by SnapesDream

schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have been with you all through this story and will continue to be here. I love it! Please continue!!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating on a night that I couldn\'t sleep, you don\'t know how much I appreciate it!!! As much as I want Sev & Hermione together, I\'m glad to see that he is a gentleman!!! Can\'t say that I blame her for being frustrated though, guess she\'s goona have to get a bit more forceful & take what she wants;-) Til chapter 13, Deb >^..^<
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As a HUGE fan of this piece, I\'d like to thank you for writing so eloquently. I would also like to thank you for including the note in your header that you were only editting and that there wasn\'t a new chapter. It is such a let down when you see a story at the top of the list and you think, \"OOH! It\'s updated! There\'s a new chapter!\" and then you look and see a few minor changes in a previous chapter. I love your story... keep it up!


Still Ill,
TheGreyLady
person Ventrue66
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait to see them finally hook up.
person kirien
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lovely story, Cassie. I like the idea of Hermione returning to Hogwarts post-grad either to teach, or like here, as the new mediwitch. As much as I love lemons betw. my favorite HP couple, it\'s good that you\'re drawing out the UST and not having them jump into bed too soon (pacing). *evil grin* Angsty!Sev with a different twist--vulnerable and self-doubting because of the potions accident is fresher than the usual Voldy-initiated mind games and torture trips. Uh oh. just occurred to me that the cause of Severus\' migraine headaches before the accident haven\'t been explained yet. Looking forward to more!

cheers,
kirien

p.s. try posting your story and anything else HG/SS you\'ve written here: http://www.lordandladysnape.net/index.php Super nice mods, beautiful layout, specialized audience (totally shippy), and it\'s fast loading.
person deblovesdragon
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh Goody! A second date... could they play table footsie at the 3 Broomsticks? PRETTY PLEASE!!
Love this fic!
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Anything to make you happy m\'dear...especially since you write such delightful tales! I look forward to each and every chapter with eager but bated breath. Please write more?
person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh so sweet!!! Sev is being quite the devil, he knows what he wants & he\'s making sure he gets it;-) I can\'t wait to see how their 2nd daoes,oes, so much sexual tension you could cut it with a knife!!! Hoping for more soo*
person kimmy
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE write more of this one soon!
person WendyNat
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Am enjoying this story very much! I\'m glad snarky sexy Sevvie is back :). You\'re doing very well with the pacing of their attraction and relationship - can\'t wait for the next update!