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by SnapesDream

person LadyBrannon
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
End of Chapter 11:
Woohoo! Snarky, witty, Severus is BACK!
LB
person LadyBrannon
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
End of Chapter 12:
Good Chapter. I like the \"inner\" conversations going on with Hermione and Severus.
LB
person LadyBrannon
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
End of Chapter 13:
SS/HG...together! Woo!
LB
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the note & the teaser!!! I can\'t wait to read the entire chapter!!! School is #1 priority (that comes from the mom in me) & I hope you do well!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^<
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13.......... YES, YES, YES!!! It took them long enough;-) I like how Hermione finally put her foot down & wasn\'t going to let him get away again!!! I look forward to seeing where you take them now that they have shared each other!!! Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^<
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just realized that I reviewed chapter 13 twice, guess I really liked it;-) I do hope that you will be updating this story soon!!!
Take care, Deb >^..^<
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Yipee!
You know, that is how sex usually is the 1st time. Just ripping off the clothes and start shagging!!! Love the realism! The kissing and exploring and oral sex can
be for the next chapter (hint, hint).
I like the relationship between Sev and Hermione.
Keep writing.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YES, YES, YES!!! Another reason for me to LOVE the #13!!! Can you tell that I am HAPPY!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this part:

person Talene
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Finally!! LOL Enjoying immencely! Please continue!!
person Morbie
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very well written, thus far.......... please by all means, contin. Mo.