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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17... It was nice to see Severus grovel as much as what Severus would!!!
I was hoping that the potion would have worked for them, it must be getting very frustrating!!! On a good note it did lead to something very important...
I LOVE the way that you had him tell her that he loves her!!! It was not only DELICIOUS, but very sweet & romantic as well!!!
Seems like something is brewing!!! Looking forward to finding out why he felt the mark burn & see what it has to do with the potion!!! Til chapter 18, Deb >^..^<
I was hoping that the potion would have worked for them, it must be getting very frustrating!!! On a good note it did lead to something very important...
I LOVE the way that you had him tell her that he loves her!!! It was not only DELICIOUS, but very sweet & romantic as well!!!
Seems like something is brewing!!! Looking forward to finding out why he felt the mark burn & see what it has to do with the potion!!! Til chapter 18, Deb >^..^<
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17- WOW! What\'s gonna happen?!?! No! I can\'t stand the suspense! I must have more!...Pleaseeh, eh, I\'m being polite now. I can\'t wait for more!!!
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16... I am so glad that you have updated!!! A lot of bitter feelings in this chapter, can\'t blame Hermione at all!!! Severus is not treating her very well in this & I am hoping that it is because he is feeling the pressure of having to make the potion as well as wanting to have it be a success after his accident!!!
I hope that spending the night alone will put a fire under his (_!_) so that he will make sure that he makes it up to Hermione!!! She deserves for him to treat her with respect!!!
Looking forward to finding out more about the potion as well as seeing if Severus will do the right thing!!! Til chapter 17, Deb >^..^<
I hope that spending the night alone will put a fire under his (_!_) so that he will make sure that he makes it up to Hermione!!! She deserves for him to treat her with respect!!!
Looking forward to finding out more about the potion as well as seeing if Severus will do the right thing!!! Til chapter 17, Deb >^..^<
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to see that you got some time to update your FABULOUS story!!! I have missed it!!!
Chapter 14 & 15.... So much going on!!! A potion, secrets, Harry & Remus knowing about Severus... I can\'t wait to find out what\'s happening that is so secretive!!! WHY won\'t Severus tell Hermione that he loves her, she deserves that from him!!!
I am really looking forward to finding out what will happen next!!! Til chapter 16, Deb >^..^<
Chapter 14 & 15.... So much going on!!! A potion, secrets, Harry & Remus knowing about Severus... I can\'t wait to find out what\'s happening that is so secretive!!! WHY won\'t Severus tell Hermione that he loves her, she deserves that from him!!!
I am really looking forward to finding out what will happen next!!! Til chapter 16, Deb >^..^<
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is coming together quite nicely. I like the way you have, in this last chapter, allowed Severus to show some serious emotion...that stemmed from a traumatic event. Good plot device.
I shall continue reading since there are more chapters...:)
LB
I shall continue reading since there are more chapters...:)
LB
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
End of Chapter 6:
Oooh! I am really getting into this story. You are doing a wonderful job. I think, with the accident and all, Severus is being fairly accurately portrayed. Kudos to you!
LB
Oooh! I am really getting into this story. You are doing a wonderful job. I think, with the accident and all, Severus is being fairly accurately portrayed. Kudos to you!
LB
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
End of Chapter 7:
Hmmm.. sur sure I would have taken it to the level of a Panic attack, but, I will admit, it did work in this story. I\'m going to go read more. :)
LB
Hmmm.. sur sure I would have taken it to the level of a Panic attack, but, I will admit, it did work in this story. I\'m going to go read more. :)
LB
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
End of Chapter 8:
Clever, Hermione. She is doing what is right here. And, I LOVE the aspect of Hermione not being at Voldermort\'s end. The angst between Harry and Hermione is fantastic...and very realistic. Good plot device...I really like it.
LB
Clever, Hermione. She is doing what is right here. And, I LOVE the aspect of Hermione not being at Voldermort\'s end. The angst between Harry and Hermione is fantastic...and very realistic. Good plot device...I really like it.
LB
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
End of Chapter 9:
*swoon* Very well written first date (under the circumstances). Good job!
LB
*swoon* Very well written first date (under the circumstances). Good job!
LB
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
End of Chapter 10:
Yeah! The PM is back!!!!! Now where are you going to take this SS/HG romance?
Still reading,
LB
Yeah! The PM is back!!!!! Now where are you going to take this SS/HG romance?
Still reading,
LB