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I never knew you were Buddhist!
Anyways, your story is pretty good. (I actually haven't read the entire thing yet, so I'm basing it on what I have read.) Although you have some typos and grammatically incorrect things here and there, your plot line is pretty stable. Some of the things I caught incorrect include:

I was enjoying this story up to now. But having Hermione run from the final battle and abandon her friends, turning her into a coward, I just can't stomach that. I no longer wish to read any more of this

Well written. Good character development, plotline, descriptions and more. A nicely original idea/twist.

perhaps you should consider to move your story in the hgss section. Just a suggestion.

Ahh, I love it! <3 <3 <3 ittttt! Hehe. Wow, I really don\'t know what to say, but this is really really smashing! Please keep up the good work and continue to keep us loving this fic! :-D Truly awesome. Thanks, and lemme know when you have this updated!

(Sorry, but this is another review from me, PartaeWILDrae. my last one didn\'t show up as I wanted it.) I luv this ficcccc!!! Wow, I really don\'t know what to say, but this was really really smashing! They\'re just going at it like bunnies, aren\'t they! Hehe, just kidding. I love this fic so far, so please updated and tell me as soon as you can. Please keep up the good work and keep us loving this fic!

MuchLuvies, PWR

I'm intrigued. I've read way too many Hermione/Severus stories and wasn't sure if I was up for another. However, I am totally hooked by the fact that after all he did with the Death Eaters, hurting someone by accident finally drove him over that edge we all knew he was standing on. I think you summed it up perfectly that this Severus is scarier than the old one, that seeing him broken and weakened is much harder..I'm not making much sense now. Anyway, enjoying story very much and will continue to read now. Just finished chapter 5 and am looking forward to reading more...

Wonderful fic! I love SS/HG pairings, and the fact that you didnt get them together when Hermione was going to school, because it seems much more realistic this way! The accident was a very good plot device, and I like that they didn't instantly fall in love. Great fic, can't wait till the next chapter!

-Candela

I am very glad to see that you have updated & I hope that you will find your motivation returning to you soon!!!

Chapter 18... What a BEAUTIFUL Christmas for Severus, at least for the most part!!! Had Albus not interupted them I\'m sure their entire day would have been more than memorable!!!

So, Lucius is getting out soon:( What did he do to pull that off?!? What is up with Draco & Harry knowing more than Severus?!? I am hoping that it is for his protection & not for anything less worthy than that!!!

I look forward to seeing how this batch of potion works as well as what will happen when Lucius is released!!! Til chapter 19, Deb >^..^<

AAAAAARRRGGH !!! OMG!!! This is such a great fic! I cant stand it! I was reading it , totaly engrossed I get to the bottom of chapter 17 and thats when I realized there wasnt another chapter there! I jumped out of my chair and screamed NOOOO!! Well everyone in the room jumped about 10 feet in the air and stared at me bug eyed. My husband ran over to me and asked who died. I had to explain that nobody died and I was upset that there wasnt another chapter yet and he looked at me like I had grown a third eyeball in the middle of my forehead. I started laughing and he said he was worried that I was getting to \" into\" this story. The reason I am telling you this is My being so absorbed in your story is a HUGE compliment! I have read hundreds of fics on this and other sites and there are rarely any that I get so los tha that I feel the need to scream when they arent completed. PLEASE post more soon. I am loving this story and it is absolute torture to have to wait to find out what is going to happen next. * Kudos* This is a wonderful story about one of my favorite ships. You are doing a fantastic job with the characters. I am REALLY looking forward to reading more!

~ Jaimie ~