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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*wonders if she could borrow wok and spoon from Fish, for *ahem* personal reasons....*
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellant story so far. So dark and yet it draws you in. You want to know what is going to happen and how everyone is going to overcome their horrible trials! Write more!!!
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You did a beautiful job covering the family dynamic and the whole conflict Severus felt about his father. Very complex.
I think he needs some comfort though, so if you just want to send him my way for a day or two, I\'m sure I can help him out. :)
I think he needs some comfort though, so if you just want to send him my way for a day or two, I\'m sure I can help him out. :)
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Harsh and very well written chapter about Snapes homelife. All though the HP books don\'t touch on much into his family life, you can kind of figure out why he went to the dark side and why he\'s such an ass now. And I love it. Great chapter.
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October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow - amazing visuals evoked through your words - and wow again
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October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is not the sort of thing I\'d usually read, but you did it beautifully (okay, perhaps not the appropriate word, but you writing was superb!) Can\'t wait to read more... (do you want me to beg? No, will not lower myself to that...oh, okay...puhlease?!)
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October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t you ever acuse me of being too dark and depressing again!! LOL. Very...much as described (the word \"nice\" just does not seem to fit). I can\'t wait to see more.