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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My dear, you have excd yod yourself.
Although am not overly fond of graphic violence but yours was done so eloquently it was perhaps not to my taste, but palpable. This is indeed a very dark Severus you have created, and I find myself drawn to him. You have a talent, I am glad you choose to use it well.
I am completely sane I can assure you, I am always in control of my mad moments! I am surprised you believe that I have encouraged you to become a language snob, t\'was not me, it is an innate skill, you cannot be taught it, it just needs to be awoken.
Am enjoying this immensely. Much to my delight I have no idea what direction this is going to go in, or even if OUR (phew...glad I recovered from that one) Severus can ever be redeemed.
With anticipation,
Your humble Servant.
Daya.
Although am not overly fond of graphic violence but yours was done so eloquently it was perhaps not to my taste, but palpable. This is indeed a very dark Severus you have created, and I find myself drawn to him. You have a talent, I am glad you choose to use it well.
I am completely sane I can assure you, I am always in control of my mad moments! I am surprised you believe that I have encouraged you to become a language snob, t\'was not me, it is an innate skill, you cannot be taught it, it just needs to be awoken.
Am enjoying this immensely. Much to my delight I have no idea what direction this is going to go in, or even if OUR (phew...glad I recovered from that one) Severus can ever be redeemed.
With anticipation,
Your humble Servant.
Daya.
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved the Hepatic Hex, and this story is very intriguing so far. Keep up the great work, I drool over your skill... jealousy is a curse...sigh.
WendyNat
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Never would I make such a presumption my friend. Very unwise of anyone. hehe I am still interested and still reading. Nice.
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well....hmmm.....I\'m intruiged to see where you go with this. I am waiting to see how the prologue connects to the rest. I hate making assumptions so i wait to see. Please keep writing!
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! *makes secret plans for wok and wooden spoon that shall at the least be diverting, at best, entertaining*. My mother was very cruel to me, you know, she used to chase me up the stairs with a wooden spoon. I therefore blame this childhood trauma for the palpitations I get whenever I walk into the kitchen and attempt to cook.
Wonderful chapter, delightful juxtaposition ben ten the power Severus has, and the helplessness he is feeling, damn Lily and the the Gryffindor 4, damn them to hell and back for tormenting my Severus...
Sorry, of course, I meant, OUR Severus. *ahem*.
May I congratulate you on an exquistite WIP, that has lured me in like a moth to the flame and is now keeping me there, occasionally burning my fragile wings...sod the poetic nonsense, please, update soon!
Daya.
Wonderful chapter, delightful juxtaposition ben ten the power Severus has, and the helplessness he is feeling, damn Lily and the the Gryffindor 4, damn them to hell and back for tormenting my Severus...
Sorry, of course, I meant, OUR Severus. *ahem*.
May I congratulate you on an exquistite WIP, that has lured me in like a moth to the flame and is now keeping me there, occasionally burning my fragile wings...sod the poetic nonsense, please, update soon!
Daya.
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very, very well done once again! Better watch it - I\'ll be standing right over your shoulder waiting for the next chapter!
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So sad. again. sad, sad, sad. Beautiful, but sad.
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful addition to a dark and yet intriguing story! So much angst androw!row! I am very much enjoying this as you go along and can\'t wait for the next chapter, so get cracking! *evil grin*
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwww... poor Sevvie-kins...
*attempts to defend Sev from Snape Snr*
*Snape Snr glares at her*
*runs away screaming and flailing arms wildly*
*hides undesk esk hugging balloon*
*balloon bursts*
*hits self in face with wok*
*gets evil idea*
*chases Snape Snr with oversized wok and wooden spoon*
YAY!
I loved the portrayal of Sev\'s younger life... really scary though... poor Sevvie!
MORE SOON PLEASE!
Ciao,
Fish
*attempts to defend Sev from Snape Snr*
*Snape Snr glares at her*
*runs away screaming and flailing arms wildly*
*hides undesk esk hugging balloon*
*balloon bursts*
*hits self in face with wok*
*gets evil idea*
*chases Snape Snr with oversized wok and wooden spoon*
YAY!
I loved the portrayal of Sev\'s younger life... really scary though... poor Sevvie!
MORE SOON PLEASE!
Ciao,
Fish
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My dear,
Beautifully and intelligently written, and I note the presence of many words with more than three syllables much to my delight. The subject matter is delicately treated, allowing the horror to shine through, but not so much as to alienate the reader, the characters are well within canon, as much as they can be considering the story line, and the descriptive quality of your work is a delight to read, amazingly poetic prose.
I bow down to your talent oh mistress. I humbly ask that you continue with this intelligent work, and hope it inspires others to write as well.
With anticipation of an update...*not that I am impatient in the least*
Daya
Beautifully and intelligently written, and I note the presence of many words with more than three syllables much to my delight. The subject matter is delicately treated, allowing the horror to shine through, but not so much as to alienate the reader, the characters are well within canon, as much as they can be considering the story line, and the descriptive quality of your work is a delight to read, amazingly poetic prose.
I bow down to your talent oh mistress. I humbly ask that you continue with this intelligent work, and hope it inspires others to write as well.
With anticipation of an update...*not that I am impatient in the least*
Daya