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I might have a spare wok and wooden spoon in here... you can make great music with those... and saucepans!

This chapter was really great! I love it!
Sorry it\'s a bit brief, but i need to finish my coffee and then rush out to the shops!

Ciao
Fish

Wonderful chapter again, very dark, yet perversly also very enlightening, its interesting to place Snape at Lily\'s death (excuse me if I\'m pickihis his up wrong, its very early in the morning) ,I like the way you deal with the contrasting aspects of his psyche, as for his breaking down, beautifully caught, and heartbreaking, every word was a painful delight to read.

You are still my Dark Mistress.

Daya

Wow - this was a powerful chapter. I felt so much for Severus... I could scarcely breathe in some parts. Keep up the awesome (yes, I\'m a child of the 80s) work!!!!

I don\'t know what you\'re talking about, that chapter was brilliant!! Such a fantastic take on the night the Potter\'s died. And poor Severus. I don\'t even have anything sarcastic ty. :y. :)

Still reading.... Your writing is vivid and I am wondering still where you intend to go with this. I will be keeping up. To quote Columbia \"....Stay sane inside insanity...\"

Weel, I doubt that my men in white coats are thrilled with me either but....who cares? hehe You certainly have a way with words! hehe I keep telling the people at the funny farm that i don\'t suffer from insanity. I keep telling that I enjoy every single minute of it but I don\'t think it is reassuing them any. Go figure! LOL Please continue to write and I will continue to read. :)

Shem, my darling, darling Shem
It is, as all ways, wonderful. Wow, your muse has really out done her(himf thf this time. I am REALLY enjoying the story. Your writing is beautiful and powerful. The feelings that you express and the scenes you discribe are just magnifacent. This really is a work of art. Breathlessly awaiting the next chapter. I remain, as always, yours...
with much love,
tigress

Very Dark, but still amazing. I am intrigued to see where you are going with this....that was one hell of a cliff hanger. Very nicely done.
Truthfully, I don\'t know what the fuck is up with my story. I have just gotten back to town. My 21st birthday was Friday and I left to go party. I should have a new chappy up within the next 2 days...I\'ll try to make it sooner and I\'ll TRY to make it good. So, sorry for the wait. Once again dearest Shem, your stories amaze me!!
much love,
tigress

Wow! Poor Severus! His life is like one big nightmare! You really make it easy for me to understand why he acts the way he does and feels the things he feels. You are a gifted writer that you can do that! I don\'t bother w/ warnings when reading most stories on Adultfanfiction.net because I know it\'s graphic. I saw nothing wrong w/ your last 2 chapters. They were quite detailed and horrific to say the least, but the way you write like an artist paints. I think of this story like a dark peice of art work. Well, writen! I assure you that I will be looking forward to all your upcoming chapters!

All I have to say is that I am SOOO glad I read this in the morning and not before bed. Yipes. Beautifully written, but yipes. (And to think I\'m actually throwing you a bone today with In the House of Fallen Angels, you sadistic woman!)