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for The First Enochian Key

by shemhamforash

person WendyNat
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh - nice final section. Poor Severus, but I\'m glad someone is comforting him - dare I hope that it\'s our inimitable know-it-all??? Wheeeee! Pleez fluffy happy ending... pleez fluffy happy ending... pleez fluffy happy ending.... WendyNat
person Rilla
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay...that made me cry. This is just the most beautiful thing ever.

Here is my guilty little secret - when I opened the window for this update, I was on the phone with my mama. I thought, okay, I\'ll just get it ready and read it when I hang up. Oh, no. I have no idea what I may have just agreed to on the phone because I got so sucked in to the story. I am a terrible daughter.

I feel your boredom. Believe me, I do. Yay for your five year-old!! Little divas are great! My almost four year-old runs around the house reciting Edward Gorey books. I\'m glad we\'re homeschooling because my secret fear is her going to kindergarten someday and when they ask for the alph say saying, \"A is for Amy who fell down the stairs...\"

Okay, that was just a mindless ramble. But I will miss this story. Truly. ::sniffle::
person Ana Ng
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi-I\'m terrible and I never review, but I am really liking this story. Please give Sevvie a happy ending!

I am beginning to notice a pattern in SS/HG author/reader/obsessers, though, has anyone else? Areall all young, fairly intelligent, slightly goth leaning mothers of one or more children under the age of five? (Whilst on the subject of singing/dancing babies, my daughter was insane over 7 nation army by the White Stripes when she was like 8 months old and she would go insane whenever it came on, and sing the tune (dum, dum, dumdumdum,dum, dum)and dance.)

Anyway, in the future I\'ll review more! Did I just make sense, just now? I hope so. Thanks for writing for us!
person PotionsMistressM
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really really enjoy your story! Please update soon- I am quite sure I am addicted! Thank you!
person tigress
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
First,loving the story
Second, doesn\'t sound like your 21 was fun at all. Someday I will fly across the big blue sea and we will celebrate it properly, your imaginary friends can come too. But only if they promise not to laugh.
Third, loving the story.
much love always,
tigress
person Rilla
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am finding myself compelled ull ull Severus from your story and comfort him. Angst-galore! Beautiful.
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved Riff-Raff but i thought Columbia\'s quota appripo. (Can\'t spell worth shit! Where\'s the spell check when you need it? Check please...table one!) Where did *that* quote come from. Hmm? hehe 17 year old angst. Huh? I am 36 anill ill have angst I am trying to work though so don\'t feel alone. Youare not a loser! I have never called you that and never will. You have a wonderful and active imagination. I have a very active imagination as well. Mom always said too active. I was raised in a very strict home and shortly after I left home I began to rebel against most everything I was taught. Results of being raised conservative Christian. Nothing wrong with the religeon. Not my bag though and the problem was with the strict conservatism....just wanted to clarify before someone through fits. You have my e-mail addy.....write to me sometime and we\'ll talk. You can also reach me on Y! or MSN messenger. E-mail me and I\'ll tell you how.

Great chapter BTW....I know how Sev in your story feels for the most part and I enjoy the way you write. Please continue my friend.
person Daya
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mistress of the Dark, you are an equal! Am considering promoting you after this chapter, am most enjoying this chapter!! Damn the double exclamation marks, sign of an unstable personality. Must stop using them

May I just make one request? An update soon please? Am being tortured by imbeciles at my place of education, including argument with Short Story lecturer who is refusing me permission to use death as an eiphanic moment in my work. Sod.

More please, for my fragile sanity!

Daya
person nesscafe
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH! Please tell me that Hermione will be coming of age soon and showing this poor man the honest pure love he so desperately needs! I don\'t know how much more pain I can watcis tis tortured soul go through!!!! *sniffle* He just needs one person!!! It\'s so sad!!!! *sob* What are you trying to do to me?! *sniff*
person nesscafe
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD!!!! That was beautiful and sad and poetic and heartbreaking!!! I loved it of coarse! *sob* *sniff* I just feel for that poor tortured soul! All his life experiences made him what he was and even though thts hts he\'s commited were just heinous I can\'t help feeling so sorry for him! What terrific writing! I am just amazed that you have been able to make me believe this was his life. My mind pictures everything so clear as you go along. Excellant work! I do hope you are able to keep going w/ this! I am eager to read more! I say if the muse doesn\'t cough up the story then she deserves a little smack around... *waving at men in white coats* Give them hugs for me it\'s been a while.... ;c)