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for The First Enochian Key

by shemhamforash

person Persia
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I just have to mention it after you stated a quote from Trent Reznor at the top of the chapter.... Does anybody else think Trent would be perfect for a slightly younger Snape! (Come on you know he would! Alan Rickman so looks like an older Trent Reznor in the movies! Of course he\'d still need Alan\'s delicious voice; nobody has a better Snapish voice than Alan). Anyways, great fic, I\'m going to continue reading now...
person Jo
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry, but this review is just going to be a shower of praise. I read your fic in more or less 1 go (wasn\'t planning to, mind, but the 1st chapter was so gripping) and i loved it. So dark and moving, it really touched me and i had tears running down my cheaks whilst enthralled in the epilogue. You are gifted!
person lilyadar
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I read the 1st and second chapter and was simply in awe with your way of words! Excellent!!

lily
person GrrArrg
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O.K., My review as promised

That was the saddest and scariest look into the human mind I have ever witnessed.Brilliant. Between that, and Rilla\'s \'Not a happy tale\' I can\'t stand for Sev to go through any more pain!
I need to go and read something fluffy and then I\'ll be back to read \'The Hepatic Hex\'!!
Love ya, even though you are clearly the daughter of darkness
Kisses
GrrArrg
person Stephanista
schedule October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i wish i could review it
but i am suddenly left speechless and numb
entirely void of everything but emotion
running rampant through my psyche
it will take immense time for me to come to terms with this
person nesscafe
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wait a minute! What\'s going on? I don\'t understand is Lucius in his mind or in ghost form or really alive? I\'m a little thick I think. I don\'t understand, but this will end in peace for poor Severus won\'t it? I have a hard time w/ unhappy endings! Please post the rest soon, so I know what\'s going on!

person Daya
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gah.

I had a long, detailed review typed for your final chapter, mainly saying how wonderful your portrayal of Severus was, how realistic he is, and how elegantly you write, and then the blasted thing wouldn\'t post.

Oh this epilogue was more than I could have hoped for. Tortured, descriptive, and agonising to read. The ambiguity at the end is perfect, although many of us would have wanted a happy ending, I had this feeling that it wouldn\'t be coming.

Its truly a sad thing that you won\'t be writing any more, do not let uni get you down! I look forward until the moment I see some more of your work up.

With love and respect.


Daya.
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think I can understand but I am....in my igorance no doubt, not sure how the title to your tale fits. Ah.....lack of knowledge rears it\'s ugly head. Excellent tale.....a bit dark but excellent nonetheless.
person Rilla
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Perfect ending. Really. Of course, I chose the happy route in my head, but it is perfect. It would not have made sense if he had no severe issues at the end. I\'m so sad it\'s over. :(
person Deborah
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
An amazing story. As frustrating as the ending was, I think any clearer ending would have been ... wrong. You did well.