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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! No frickin way!!!!! DAAAAAMN that\'s good... Update soon!
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please Please write the next one as fast as u can i want to know what happend.
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just read your story. I enjoyed it, read it start to finish in one sitting. Can\'t wait to see what happened to the twins.
- Terry
- Terry
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story, why don\'t you have any reviews????
After the first chapter I was hooked and had to read it all in one sitting!
I like the interactions with Hermione and her *grandfather*.
Thanks for writing!
After the first chapter I was hooked and had to read it all in one sitting!
I like the interactions with Hermione and her *grandfather*.
Thanks for writing!
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have read the first couple of chapters. I think there is something missing in chapter 3.
I have really enjoyed this fic so far. I look forward to finding out about the secrets that Hermione\'s parents are keeping and how Draco\'s plan progresses. I will see if the 3rd chapter gets fixed in the next couple of days, otherwise I will just keep reading without it.
I have really enjoyed this fic so far. I look forward to finding out about the secrets that Hermione\'s parents are keeping and how Draco\'s plan progresses. I will see if the 3rd chapter gets fixed in the next couple of days, otherwise I will just keep reading without it.
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hunnypeach:
Evil, Evil woman!
How could you leave us hanging like that? ;D
This is a really good story. It had some very interesting twists like Hermione\'s *heritage*. I liked that Draco, once he knew he loved Hermione was very determined about their relationship. I can\'t wait to read the sequel.
One piece of constructive commentary: please make sure to use the spell & grammar check. I noticed quite a bit of wrong usage words: their for they\'re and wand for want. I don\'t know if you have a beta reader but these are just the things they search for.
Your ideas have new twists on familiar themes and you clear can visualize lengthy and detailed stories, don\'t short change yourself by getting the the spelling/grammar messed up. The folks at CV are really helpful in this area.
Congrats on the fabulous story!
Jules
Evil, Evil woman!
How could you leave us hanging like that? ;D
This is a really good story. It had some very interesting twists like Hermione\'s *heritage*. I liked that Draco, once he knew he loved Hermione was very determined about their relationship. I can\'t wait to read the sequel.
One piece of constructive commentary: please make sure to use the spell & grammar check. I noticed quite a bit of wrong usage words: their for they\'re and wand for want. I don\'t know if you have a beta reader but these are just the things they search for.
Your ideas have new twists on familiar themes and you clear can visualize lengthy and detailed stories, don\'t short change yourself by getting the the spelling/grammar messed up. The folks at CV are really helpful in this area.
Congrats on the fabulous story!
Jules