rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

i don't know if you'll take my suggestion seriously or not since you've already completed the fic and started a sequal, but it was really wierd to read about Mrs. Granger talked calmly to her daughter, and then three seconds later sobbing into her husbands chest. the crying almost seemed pointless. and still have no idea way harry and ron were on the grounf laughing. ron didn't say anything particularly funny, so again, another outburst out of the mouth that seemed completely pointless. i loved draco's introduction, i love it that they're both heads, and i love it that hermione spent two hours looking for a book everyone knows she doesn't need. i love the plotline so far, and i can't wait to read more, so right now i'll shut up and continue reading. YEAH.

you no you could wright more and not mack me wait for that loung . i mean come on h don't be so mean to the short people. oh i love it.

very well done....tho some weird spelling errors keep showing up from time to time. i assume these are formatting issues with the site? just might want to fix those when you get a chance. off to read the sequel.

this was so gripping, but how dare you leave it on such a cliff hanger!!!!
:D

You are a talented writer and you should be very prowd of this peice

This story was merely perfect, please update ASAP, cant wait. Really cant wait!

The story, in all, was not bad. It didn\'t have a bad plotline, but it could have been reinforced better. However, it was hard to continue reading it because I found LOADS of gramatical errors. Should you write again, I suggest getting it beta\'d. But, as I said, I enjoyed parts of it.

i luv it...please do another one!

HOLY SHIT!!! THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST ENDING EVER!!! I CAN\'T STOP LAUGHING!!! Let me explain before you think I am a blood-thirsty lunatic. Okay, I was downloading Super Mario Bros. MP3\'s, and I was curently downloading the World Clear Fanfare.....and it sounds al triumphant like. Well, at that point, it had started playing, because the crap-ass site I was getting it from makes it take forever to download, and it automatically plays when it is finished. At the same time, I had read that they went to the hospital wing and found Madam Pomfrey dead with a knife in her back. You can only imaging what the hell whas going through my head at that point. It was the mst hilarious thing I have said in the past 24 hours. Well, there was the fact that I was hanging out with my brother, and he started poking me with his feet....and whenever he does that....I get really disturbed and make wigh pitched squeals and screams, well, today, I squealed out the word \'seatbelt\'. Yeah...I am lame....but I can\'t wait to read the sequal!

THAT IS FUCKING AMAZING!!!! \"Hermione gasped as the reality of all that had been said finally hit her