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for Dark Corridors

by StarwolfShadowDancer

person erotic*chaos
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh, i'm really enjoying this fic and i wanna kno wats gonna happen next. not really sure how the lesbians fit in but im hoping you'll tie it together all right...or just leave them out. And watevers going on with ron and hermione, i hope they work it out. hurry up with the next chapter, im dying for something to happen between harry and draco.
person line
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was really good!
I liked it very much and I would love to read more soob.
-line
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey!! I really like how you\'re working the story, I can\'t wait for the next chapter, hope its a little longer!!
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i agree, ditch the slyth girls!
person alioth
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mary sues + switching tenses = badness.
person star
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. I hope you update it soon. I will book mark it! please continue with the two girls and ron and hermione

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person Skwerl
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The story is good so far but I say ditch the Slytherin girls, they just make it sound like a Mary Sue and take the plot away. Other than that, keep up with Draco and Harry, I would like to see what happens next!
person leggylover
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very good. i love it! will happy change housees?cnt wait.