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for The Wedding

by Lizski

person bansh
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
\"there could be a sequel\" Words of hope for a poor drowning reader to cling to! Seriously though, incredible job! I love it!!! You write Severus and Lucius so well... Beautiful story! (Though don\'t get me started on ending things right at the *beginning*... lol) Wonderful job, I can\'t wait for more from you!
person Kiristeen
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::sighs:: Beautiful, just beautiful! Romantic in the style of regency romances. : )

And I *like* your Lucius. He is definitely different than the Lucius we usually see, but I *can* see him getting to that point after hitting rock bottom and basically losing everything except his money, and then realized that just maybe there are something worth more than the cold comfort of money.


Kiri
person Persephone
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. Wonderfully well written characters all round, but especially Lucius and Severus! Really enjoying them bickering over Hermione. More house points for you!
person LilyMalfoy
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m loving this story. Especailly the dycs ocs of LM/HG/SS. Its interesting watching the three of them interact at dinner.
person deedee
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just read all those chapters and they\'re highly enjoyable. I love the naughty, seductive Lucius type. When a man knows what to do with his hands and is good at it, it\'s a clear indication that he will be good in bed:) Deep down inside, I think Snape was jealous the first time he saw Hermione and Lucius together. It\'s interesting that Lucius threated Snape. Why is he feeling protective of her now? Is it because he sees her as his interest and then Snape comes in and is intruding on his so-called possession of Hermione? Maybe Snape should\'ve tauciuucius up on his offer to share her. I can all ready picture it, they\'re going to end up having a wizarding duel in the library. Those poor book:( j/k:) Now since Lucius knows that Snape is a hypocrite, I think Lucius should pursue Hermione even more (if not to get laid, at least just to piss off Snape):)

Your right about weddings. They are so much work and can be awful:p The best way to get through them is in a alcohol induced haze, especially if a lot of the guests don\'t get along. It also helps to have the guests mildly drunk with alcohol, full with food, and dancing to music just so they forget to kill eachother. Please write more, I can\'t wait to see what happens.

I\'m glad you decided to write \"Lucius\' Bookshelves\". A good Hermione and Lucius fic is hard to find.
person Scumcious
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It\'s a really great story! Keep it up!!!!
person OzRatbag2
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is rather good, although I do think you\'ve sanitised Lucius a bit too much. There isn\'t even a curl of the lip with his private thoughts about the \'mudblood\' and it does seem a bit OOC, given the descriptions of Lucius in canon.

Other than that, the URST (Unresolved Sexual Tension) between Severus and hermione is very well and and the fireworks promise to be spectacular.

I\'ll be interested to see how you tie this all together.
person Rilla
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mmm...I forgot how incredibly delicious your Lucius is in this story! It\'s even better the second time around. :)
person jen
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like that you\'re putting up chapters fast... but
MORE MORE MORE :)
person Arsinoe
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes. I firmly believe Lucius\' hands are capable of great things!