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for The Wedding

by Lizski

person Maddy Riddle
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. I like it a lot.
Although I would like to read a sequel, I can understand your decision of stopping at that point... and this way both stories (this one and Lucius\' Bookshelves) ended with similar scenes, the three of them saying goodbye at the door of Malfoy\'s Manor (although in one Severus leaves alone, and with Hermione in the other *grins*).

I need to say that I love Lucius\' Bookshelves more than this one. Not sure why. But after reading that one, I was missing the Lucius you portray there... and The Wedding helped me reading a little more of that character.
person Liz
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay, I think I was rather affected by Lucius\' Bookshelves because, really, I read this story, thinking that it would be really great with an alternate version with Hermoine picking Lucius.. oh dear! :)

Anyways, great story! I liked how you used the wedding plotline.. it\'s an interesting way to get HG/SS together. And there are far too many cliches at this point.. :)
person Grill
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OhmyGOD! This is so BRILLIANT! I read a lot of Hermione/Snape-fics as well as Hermione/Lucius-fics, but this is definitely one of the best I\'ve ever read! This one, along with \"Lucius\' Bookshelves\", is so great! I think you\'re doing both Snape and Lucius well in character, because after all, we who read the books can\'t know exactly how they would behave or how they\'d think in different circumstances, but the way you describe it is very muike ike I imagine it myself, so it\'s great! Brilliant fic! I don\'t know, it just s tha that a sort of drama containing Hermione, Snape and Lucius always workes out well... Wondering who\'ll get the girl in the end and so on... :)
(And just as a final note, I don\'t think I\'ve ever read anything quite so beautiful as when Snape tried to \"scare\" Hermione in his room and lost control, that was amazing!)
person Amy
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What about Harry? I mean I absolutely adored the story but what happened to Harry? He was so jealous he d idnt just disappear did I t I think it would be good if someone wrote a story telling what Harry did to try and get Herm back.....or stop Sev from seeing her? I dunno it just seemed like he was really jealous and knowing Harry he wouldnt just s it around waiting for something ot happen hed try and MAKE it happen ya know? So i think itd be a cool sequel or w hatnot...
person Eternal Enchantress
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, this was really good, i generally read loads of these fics but this one was really well written. i hope to read more our our stories in the future.

person Gabriele
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! Don
person Persephone
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well done, lovely story!
person deedee
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Lucius:( I feel bad for the guy since he now realizes that he is actually alone in his life. Reality really sucks.

I\'m glad you gave this story a happy ending, because I like them too:) If you write a sequel, will Harry be the conflict in the story because he can\'t settle on the idea that she wants Severus instead of him? I can see Harry starting a lot of trouble. Well whatever you decide, I\'m sure it will be fun to read:)
person jen
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
and it ends well too.

bravo
person Kiristeen
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! I just had to tell you that this thoroughly enjoyable. I noticed your comments about Lucius, and I have to say that so far, I find him completely believable as a post Voldemort downfall, post time in azkaban Lucius. He\'s still arrogant. He\'s still plotting. He\'s not trying to marry Hermione, he\'s trying to seduce her. lol I can\'t see as how that would be counter to *any* of his beliefs.

Severus is well written here too.)
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LOVED Draco\'s comments including the loose knickers part to Hermione. LOL I can *so* see Draco saying that kind of thing. This Draco anyway.

Can\'t wait for more.

Kiri