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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wait what, Lucious and Hermione? Wha? I'm getting shivers.. eeeew.
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No! Lucious is too creepy. Urrrrgh. The whole idea gives me shivers of the unhappy sort! >.<
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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
quite a clever plot, good characterization. but the typos are distracting. have u thought about getting a beta? keep up the good work. c
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I don't know how to explain what I thought of it. It was the best story I've ever read I mean WOW! You must have thought hard about it and you did a terrific job. Just think about fixing all the spelling mistakes that kinda of bugged me a little.
well great job.
LumberJackGirl1
well great job.
LumberJackGirl1
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!! mix it up a little though if you do write one...i love jealous snape, its so much more entertaining then happy snape. MORE BITE! Angsty, more angsty!!!!!!! and a fight..ooohhh make them have a fight!
plz write a sequel you are an AWSOME author, i bet you could even give JKR a run for her money...if the HP books were about sex...
WRITE ON
plz write a sequel you are an AWSOME author, i bet you could even give JKR a run for her money...if the HP books were about sex...
WRITE ON
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So this solves the eternal briefs or boxers question. Thanks for a fun story.
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading the story, for the most part. The story was generally well done...the plot was good, the characterizations while not strictly canon were good, the emotions were realistic. However, it would be beneficial to rework it to correct spelling and typographical errors. There were a few spots that I found difficult because I was having to figure out what you were saying because fo the mistakes.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story. Please work on a sequal, with Lucius going back to his nasty roots. Thanks for the happy ending.
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March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable and light - I liked the clothing descriptions. I enjoyed your version of Lucius because in the films he is just so beautiful to look at and has such a sexy voice - it seems a waste of a gorgeous wizard that he has to be an extra-wicked death-eater. I\'m sure I couldn\'t say no to a massage in the library from Lucius!