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by darc

person WolfDragonDemon
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is please continue!
person Harryfan
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, I especially like the different behaviors from all the characters and the guys that say you shouldn\'t do that are wrong!
It\'s YOUR story and YOU write it!!!

Please keep it up :)
person sevati
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter 1 seems to be cut off before it is done? I haven\'t checked any further.
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chapter. I love it. Please update soon. Whaen are you updating All in the Name of War? I hope it\'s soon.

Tiffany
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story so far!!! Keep it up, and update so! An!
person qtfool
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
U can't keep me hanging! I need to know everyone's response to Severus being Remus' lifemate! Write more soon!!!!!
person Elizabeth
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just wanted to tell you that i love all of your fics and how you tend to make the characters your own not many people are very good at that and just copy from others but your writing has that original feeling please keep up the excellent writing you'll always be on my favorites list


Elizabeth
person M.E.
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn It!~ A Half-cliffie, hehe. I absolutely love this story. Screw however told you that your Severus was ooc! I think he is great. I can\'t wait to see what happens between him and Remus. Remus deserves all the happiness he can get. A new identity for him? That was a twist! It really threw me out of the lup. haha. Get it lup as in a mis spelt way of loop as in Lupin? haha. You didn\'t get it. I know you didn\'t. Oh well. I guess I shall bide my time until your next post by spending the days sending anonyomous e-mails to mean people who tell authors that their works of art are ooc. So you better post soon, before I get arrested or something for e-mail assalt. hehe! Can\'t wait to see if there is any sexy man love w/ H&D as Harry changes. Now that is certainly something I would like to read: Harry markins tes territory! Oh man, shouldn\'t get myself worked up like this. Anyway, your kid really doesn\'t need diapers, now does he/she? So, buy dial up AOL and get to posting. by the way, can\'t wait for the next upload!
person heather
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is great. i cant wait for the next chapters!!!!!!
person Mei
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, i LOVE this fic! Ron and Hermione bashing, Ministry bashing and all my favorite couples. Whoohoo! I can\'t still can believe you somehow managed to mix a Sev/lilly storyline with Sev as Harry\'s dad with the slash pairing of Sev and Remus. *glomp* Thank you so much! Ooo, and Sirius bashing, too, this is simply too good.
I kinda skipped over the autor\'s notes (i know, i know, my bad -_-\", but i was just too cought up in the story) anyway, i did read the one where you responded to a reviewer saying Sev and co were OOC. Well, they might not exactly be Canon, but for that I\'ll just go and read the books (with all the stupid Het pairings *grumble grumble*) So don\'t let anybody tell you this fic ain\'t good enough or something! I absolutely adored it and i can\'t wait to read more *nods*
Hugs and good luck!
Mei