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for A Chance at Normal

by darc

person starr
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is so good !!!!! more where are the updates !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Mishamad
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story is going well for me, but chapter 15 is very jerky and the paragraphs seem to jump before the sentences are finished, is it a new format, or a problem with posting?
person stray523
schedule May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First the criticism: you need to fix the format for most of the story, trying to read with so much spacing is rather annoying. You could use a beta too. Now the compliments: i really liked your story and can't wait to see more of it when you have the time to write. Whoever it was that said nasty things about your story and didn't even have the guts to leave their name is an asshat. Forget people like that and write what makes you happy. There are plenty of stories where people are OOC, that's why it's called fanfic.
person Darkalli
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please, please, please update. This story is so good and your a big meanie for leaving it where you did. I can't wait to read what Lucian does to black, it will serve the bastard right. I love the whole Lucius as a spy, I always try to make him out as a good guy in my stories and I think that the OOCness was a nice touch. I hate it when people make the characters out to be almost like the ones in the books, it gets rather boring. Keep up the good work and please update soon.
person angel
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great ... i loev it.. i hopeyou will come back and update your storys.. later for now

angel
person moonstone glow
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please please please please please PLEASE will you start updating again. your stories are very good, and i don't know about anyone else, but i am becoming DESPERATE for some resoulution on a couple of them.
person Noneya
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing! I\'m Waiting!!!
person smfurgerson
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been reading this for a while, and enjoy it. Is there any possibility of an update in the near future?
person Christina F.
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM

I just read A Chance at Normal its wonderful . And I really hope you keep the story going
a very time. I seem to find longer more detailed stories the most fun and the most enjoyable.
I hope you update soon I can\'t wait to read about the meeting between Harry\'s new self and Black.
I hope he punches in that big mouth. If he does I\'ll be laughing. Thank you for the woundful story
please add more soon. Christina Finnegan.
person emma
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on plese up date

i wanna know what happens next, its getting real good