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November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful story. I\'m completely loving it. And if I\'ve guessed the identity of Remus\' daughter correctly, I know someone who\'s going to be killed horribly by a werewolf. Hope so. I love diredirection you took Dumbledore. Other authors acknowledge the manipulation, but the degreee you\'ve taken it to is amazing. The speed of updates is a godsend as well.
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November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this storyline! It is original to my eyes! Bravo!
Please post more of this story.
And have Remus kill Peter Pettigrew!
It would be a fitting end to that rat!
Please post more of this story.
And have Remus kill Peter Pettigrew!
It would be a fitting end to that rat!
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November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow that is a very compleing storie and lease update soon.
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a great update! Fabulous. Can\'t wait for more!!
Jen :)
Jen :)
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November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I just wanted to let you know that I think so far your story is WONDERFUL!!!! I can\'t to read more of it....post more soon please!!!! Blessed be!
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November 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I ve been reading your story for a long time now and i think its great, i hope you update soon. I can\'t wait to read the next cahapter. Great story.
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
do you have a beta for this? if not, i sincerely suggest that you get one. the story has potential, but it also has holes and grammatical errors that are rather distracting.
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. It has the potential to be a great story. Thanks for writing!
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the best story line i have seen in a long time, so origonal. I love it, and i cant wait to see what happens.
it was a little confusing in chapter 3 when sev and remus were talking about harry\'s resorting, but that was all explained in chp 4 so it is all good!!
hurry back with more
lanna
it was a little confusing in chapter 3 when sev and remus were talking about harry\'s resorting, but that was all explained in chp 4 so it is all good!!
hurry back with more
lanna
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! That makes complete sense! : ) Completely believable as a reason for Harry to request resorting -- especially since he\'d known the hat had wanted to put him in slytherin in the first place. Very well written.
Kiri
Kiri