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for Figured You Out

by AshleyZ

person reviewer
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
like it
person Danny
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One thing
UPDATE^_^
Your fic is great
please keep writing
person Mel
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing piece of work. That\'s the first time I review smut... well I\'m dirrty and I just love your work. Go on with it and the following chapters I\'m going to review for sure. You\'re brilliant XD
person Jules
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was just so sweet. Draco & Hermione have really seemed to balance their relationship better than in the last chapter.
When are Ron andry gry going to grow up? Harry is better this chapter, as I assume he has seen that Hermione is happy but Ron is such a prat. Especially thinking that Draco is only with Hermione because Draco wants to get at Harry & Ron. If she had heard that I hope she would have slapped Ron silly. How narcissistic.
The sex scenes are great; nice and steamy. I look forward to seeing where this all goes. And D & Hr moving in together, that should be hilarious.
person jkr
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I feel like I\'ve been waiting forever! Great update! Good dialogue; it feels like it has a beat, if you know what I mean. Realistic. Thanks! Update again, soon, please!
person Dru
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing work. Very good. Dont let Hermione get pregnant or have Ron invade. Let them stay happy and argue. :0) but only if Hermione wins all the time hehe.

*mwah*
Dru
person Jada
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Go Ashley! What a hot chapter! I love Draco\'s smart mouth. That\'s what we love best about him, isn\'t it? Great job!
person Lessa
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was so worth the wait!! Such an awesome chapter... lots of sex, some drama, a touch of fluff, but yet still serious. The whole part about them moving in together just seemed so realistic. They acknowledged different problems and quirks and decided to try it anyways.

*bouncing in seat* Can\'t wait for more.
person CreepySusie
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love it
i think it would be nice if you made an epilogue of Draco proposing to Hermione or something
but it\'s your fic adn if you think it\'s a bad idea forget I said it
I\'m sorry
i don\'t know the rules about whether or not reviewers are allowed to suggest endings or something
but i\'m sure you have all that planned out
Kudos to you!!!
you did a great job!!!
~ Creepy Susie
person ~*KITTYPILLA*~
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This is great! i]I love the chemistry between them!! Could you plz let me know when you update? Thanx. Keep up the good work!