rate_review Reviews

Wonderful. Just wonderful! : ) A scary yet romantic in the end chapter. delish! :)

Kiri

FABULOUS! Keep it coming! I need more!

I am convinced now, more than ever that you my dear, are the evil incarnate...Gods woman you are curel at times, and yet, I find myself being drawn further and further in by your brilliant tale...I really, really hope this little prick Frontera gets what is coming to him... I can see Sev now shoving the boys wand so far up his arse that it comes back through his mouth and he dies of septicimea. Or better yet, cast a spell to give the shithead chronic constipation, back up his bowels to his stomach, where he dies a painful, smelly death from vomiting fecal matter...Kind of approprite considering the amount of shit that comes from his mouth now...

This is brilliant, as I have stated, and I truely believe that you have the talent in you to create original work, and be successful in that venture. Although there are a lot of good authors on this site and others, most do not have that level of ability. You and and I really think that you should be writing for a living, or at the very least, give it a go..

You put so many to shame with your abilities...myself included...

Carry on, and I wait in guarded anticipation of the next updates...

thanks with much admiration...

Shem xx

Dear Bellatrix,
this fic is really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really amazing!!!!!
I must congratulate you and tell you that you are a great wriiter and can\'t wait to read more about this story and perhaps read more works of yours!!!
Keep up the terrific work!!!

I\'m definitely enjoying this well written story. I keep getting *soooo* frustrated with Hermione, though. LOL I just want to reach out and shake her til her teeth rattle. I look forward to future updates. Good luck on the sequel.

Kiri

just wanted to let you know this is an excellent story and i would not mind having you download the whole story now i wouldnot even mind waiting for a sequel i have waited for sequels for several stories and i don\'t mind doing the same for your but could you please post another chapter or at least the whole story i am hooked on this. pretty please post another chapter or the whole story

I\'m glad they\'re finally figuring things out. It was rather heartbreaking when Severus didn\'t know what was going on. Great job!

can\'t you post more than one chapter the story is great but having to wait is no funn if it is finished you shoud be able to post more than one chapter a time and why on earth would you put a fake email address on your account. any ways try to post at least two or three chapter a time because you take for ever to update but the story is great.

i am sorry for saying that your e-mail is fake but when i tried to email you i got a message saying that the email address does not exist if i offended you in any ways i am sorry but i really hate having to wait for updates like this it is misery. i hate reading an intersting story and having to wait for a long time to see how it finishes you could at least post a chapter a day this story has become one of the best i have ever read fiction or non fiction

your biggest fan
kristle

GAH!...This is so beautiful it is depressing...I am so bloody jealous that I never had someone as devoted to me...well actually I did...problem is I couldn\'t stand him..(wanker)...

Anyway...You know I am absolutely loving this...One of the best drama/love stories (if not the best) on the site...Highly intelligent...perfect...

But you shoud know all of this already...because it is only a repeat of what I have said before...

Waiting patiently (kinda) for the next update...

Shemxxx