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for Sekhmet\'s Book ~ Complete~

by Bellatrix

schedule November 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
VIAL not vile.
person Anon
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Sus
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I definitly hate Cliffhangers. *sob* I\'ve read the Sequel but this is not far enough.
Hope, the \"Snivellius\" get his Mione back... ^^ Well, maybe I am a romantic person? ;?
Well, I love happy endings!

Please write and write and write ^^
person firewall
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi I\'m only on Chapter 3 but so far, your story is just great...can\'t wait to read more about the red-headed quads. lol
person Dew Eyebright
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh wow!!! i can't wait to read more, it's soooo good. i'm so worried! i hope everything will turn out well! keep up the excelent work, i will for sure be along for the ride!
person spooky974
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I just finished reading it and I\'m getting ready to see what you have available on the next book...I hope and pray that it\'s up!!! You\'ve left me with baited breathe of wanting to see what happens next!! I\'m not much of a \"reviewer\" per say when it comes down to the technical aspects of writing so forgive me not giving any critisims on that, however, I know a good read when I\'ve found one and this one is good. I highly recommend this to anylooklooking at the reviews before they read a story!!!

I can\'t wait to read the next book!!
person Estrilda
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bellatrix
I noticed your comments about reviews over at Lord and Lady Snape and realized that I couldn\'t remember having read your stories, so found this one and read the first chapter. I liked your writing style and especially the moody Severus at the beginning before the proposal. I was a little overwhelmed by all the information at the staff meeting with everyone choosing another subject. I didn\'t think students in First Form took Arithmancy, so wasn\'t sure why there was an additional teacher for 1st and 2nd years. I was also a bit confused how teaching a third of your class periods in someone else\'s subject would lesson anyone\'s load. I understood covering the missing teachers, but didn\'t seem to be anyone picking up the upper form classes for the missing teachers, just the beginning ones. Lesson plans are much easier to modonceonce you have survived a year teaching a subject. The first year was always the most difficult for me. I also wasn\'t sure if all the new teachers and all the multiple subjects for each one was going to be important to the story, so I kind of skimmed through hoping it wasn\'t.
Anyway, it is a promising beginning and when my brain is more rested I will go back and try the who\'s who again.
Estrilda
person WriterLady1031
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading this book and it was absolutely FABULOUS! I can\'t believe you didn\'t get more reviews for this story! I will definitely be tuning in for the next installment of this story.

Ciao!
person Jamie
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
it was awesome....cant wait for the sequel