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June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for writing. This fic was WONDERFUL!
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2:
I read this awhile back and just re-read it and remembered that it was one of my favorites on AFF and I even \"marked\" it. You really write great dialogue!! Your Draco is so sarcastic and funny! Enjoyed the plot! A sweet baby son for Draco and the both of them so, happy after such a rocky engagement! \"...like a cave man, and throw me over your shoulders... We can do that tomorrow night!\" \"House elves can be so handy... they\'ll be gone by tomorrow... didn\'t doubt that for a minute.\" Very entertaining stuff!!
~~ The Blue Lady ~~
I read this awhile back and just re-read it and remembered that it was one of my favorites on AFF and I even \"marked\" it. You really write great dialogue!! Your Draco is so sarcastic and funny! Enjoyed the plot! A sweet baby son for Draco and the both of them so, happy after such a rocky engagement! \"...like a cave man, and throw me over your shoulders... We can do that tomorrow night!\" \"House elves can be so handy... they\'ll be gone by tomorrow... didn\'t doubt that for a minute.\" Very entertaining stuff!!
~~ The Blue Lady ~~
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October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sweet and beautiful! A great story, great character development and interesting witty humor every now and then! You should definitely consider doing a sequel to do this, or in fact even do a short piece, in the year between them getting married and when she found out she was pregnant! I like your writing style - your fluff was romantic and sweet, and not overboard. Yet your ability to write Draco\'s crave, need and desire spell out your ability to write hot raving smut as well. A very good blend of sweetness and tension between the characters. You succeeded in making their marriage sound like a happy ending! Well done! Can\'t wait to read more of your works!
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome!! There is no need to worry if it was to long!! It was not boring at all and kept me wanting more!! It would be nice if there was a sequel. Though it is nice where it left off. I would like a sequel though because you are so good at writing that I would really enjoy it!!! I really like the way you write and I think I\'ve read some of your other stuff too. It\'s a really good story and would be nice if you continued. Let me know if you do!! Thanks!!!
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome!! There is no need to worry if it was to long!! It was not boring at all and kept me wanting more!! It would be nice if there was a sequel. Though it is nice where it left off. I would like a sequel though because you are so good at writing that I would really enjoy it!!! I really like the way you write and I think I\'ve read some of your other stuff too. It\'s a really good story and would be nice if you continued. Let me know if you do!! Thanks!!!
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Definately need a sequel... Update soon! ;)
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
im so glad that someone recommended this on the draco and hermione ml for would have skipped, and indeed have skipped it due to the fact that it lists only two chapters , and since aff.net doesnt list word count, i wouldnt have known it was of a decent length. the fic was great and cute and i wish to see more from you in the future. thanks.
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October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story, i lvoed it alot. I am realy glad I got toread it because it was wonderful, very wonderful!!
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ashley, this is a most satisfying fic. I really enjoyed the interaction of Draco and Hermione. There was enough nasty!Draco, but he turned out well too. I know that the prophecy bit about Everett is too short, and quite unexplained, considering Hermione was identified by name, but I was willing to suspend my beliefs to just allow your words to flow. Excellent short fic, Ashley!