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December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
EEEEK..... What was the head master doing in Snapes bathroom.... can we just claim ewwww!!!!!!!!!!!!
Other than that... We say, wha hoooo!!! And now we need to find a secluded place to, er, relieve some \'stress\'.
Other than that... We say, wha hoooo!!! And now we need to find a secluded place to, er, relieve some \'stress\'.
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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I promised that I would review this to Lily, so here it is. I enjoyed reading this, I love fics where something goes wrong in Potions and it ends up with smut ^^ The only thing that bothered me though was Rod Dud Dumbledore. They just didn\'t seem in character to me. The others weren\'t also, but that was because of the potion. I know that this fic \'is a bit on the silly side\' as Lily said, but they still seem OOC to me. I\'m sorry, I didn\'t set out to write this when I began writing, but I had contextual analysis today and it still lingers ... Well, at least you both know that I read it properly and began analysing it (I would have wrote some more if my pizza wasn\'t ready ... Mmmm, pizza ...) Still though, I really do like it. It\'s got good slash and het smut, how can I not like that? ^_~
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, my two favorite ships once again meet and dance alongside each other in this well plotted fic. I think that it needs more though, like what happens more with Dumbledore\'s comment? The terrible two should continue, I think. Great Fic!
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok, I\'ll admit it!
You\'re winning me over with this whole Snape/Hermione thing. They\'re pretty damn hot!
Loved this story!
and will remember you in my will for giving Harry and Draco their nummy little scene. **rowr**
You\'re winning me over with this whole Snape/Hermione thing. They\'re pretty damn hot!
Loved this story!
and will remember you in my will for giving Harry and Draco their nummy little scene. **rowr**
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heehee! That was great!
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was fabulous! I love it that you two included Harry and Draco, too!
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m showin\' the love! Wow! That was great - I especially liked the name you gave the potion. Another chapter? If I beg?
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this! Please continue! What happens when Draco and Harry wake up? I LOVE the SS/HG *swoon* lemon. Kudos, and thanks for a story I will visit often :P
There were two typos that I think you would want to know about:
As soon as she hit the water he was stepping away, resisting with all his formidable mental strength the effect of the slave was having on his person.
slave for salve....it occurs in one other spot that I seem to have lost....
Again, thanks for the dreams tonight :P
There were two typos that I think you would want to know about:
As soon as she hit the water he was stepping away, resisting with all his formidable mental strength the effect of the slave was having on his person.
slave for salve....it occurs in one other spot that I seem to have lost....
Again, thanks for the dreams tonight :P
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I did enjoy this! Nice to see ron being sensible for once! Now where can I get hold of that potion, a large bathtub and a certain professor of potions....*wanders off in own daydream*
Daya.
Daya.
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How incredibly silly. :)
That was fun. Write together more, please. :)
That was fun. Write together more, please. :)