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by LilyMalfoy

person Ira
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
FanTastic!
person GnomishKrunchies
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay Lily! ^_^ Good story i like it!!
person Jenny
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, excellent, Lily!

G\'wan, write more!
person WendyNat
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love getting the same scene from the different points of view :). Very nicely done!
person CMW
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*grins* well done, lily. I really enjoyed your take on this. BG
person Tegan
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Wow! This was really hot! I absolutely loved the different points-of-view. Everything was extremely well written and very passionate. I\'m not a huge H/D fan, but you write it so well, I could easily become one. (Honestly, I like almost any pairing as long as it \"won\'t\" happen in canon. Playing with the charactersd had having them do things that you wouldn\'t ever read about in the books is the fun of fanfiction.)

I like that your Snape is a bit perverted, that he gets off on the idea of someone watching him. It makes his character more interesting.

Well, you certainly have my vote for continuing the story.

--Tegan
person aprilg
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really cool menage a trois. Nicely done! Kudos!!!