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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mercy this is one hot little fic you got going here! I used to not be a fan of slash, but if it\'s written well it can be just as much a turn on as het smut! This is good! Reallly good! I love the threesome angle you threw in there w/ Ron! That was just delicious! I look forward to the next chapter! Horray for good smut! Write ! ne!
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
fun fun...care to email me when you update?
-annie
-annie
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you already know how nummy I think this is...but
*rowr*
I love your Draco.
(the three of them together still blows my mind....but I love it!)
morapteapters...NOW!
heh
*rowr*
I love your Draco.
(the three of them together still blows my mind....but I love it!)
morapteapters...NOW!
heh
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
whew! That got me all hot and bothered... and it was almost more slash than het. *squirms in seat* that was, um, hot. yeah.
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a great cliffhanger. I really like this story. I\'ve never seen anyone make second person last so long believably! Great job!
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am ver impressed - I wasn\'t sure where you were going with this, but now you have me addicted. I am glad to hear that you have more planned out. I can\'t wait for more. *grins devilishly*
~Coriander
~Coriander
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October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOAH!
hot!
I love all the different POVs. I\'ve read a few others that tried that same idea, but this, truly is my favorite!
great writing
never saw the threesome coming...that was a rare treat!
wahoooooo!
keep writing, and met me know when th's m's more!
~J~
hot!
I love all the different POVs. I\'ve read a few others that tried that same idea, but this, truly is my favorite!
great writing
never saw the threesome coming...that was a rare treat!
wahoooooo!
keep writing, and met me know when th's m's more!
~J~
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Eep! That was shocking, but I liked it... maybe too much now that I think about it. I was reading this through the cracks of my fingers, but I couldn\'t stop. Oh, Lily, how you\'re corrupting my mind.
Keep it coming!
--Tegan
Keep it coming!
--Tegan
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really fun story, thanks very much for the writing of it! You might want to double check the posting at Whispers, I had problems gaining access to one of the chapters and so came over here to read it all.
Again, terrific story, thanks!
April
Again, terrific story, thanks!
April
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I really enjoyed this - I saw this challenge, and it looked like a tough one. I think you\'ve handled it admirably!