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for Alternate Sleeping Arrangements

by Ruskbyte

person Deric
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! What happened to the note that starts out ~Dear Hermione~? Edit, edit, edit, preread! Please?
Quite a few of these muck-ups all over the three chapters I can access (the authors' notes say there's five you've written).

deric
person TxA_GunFighter
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good action. Love it when Harry has good times and fun.

gunny
person Mishra
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, but I really don\'t understand where Ginny and Harry get their mental link and their extra powers.
The order is an organisation and not a pool of power.
person redjacobson
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi; very interesting beginning; but, was there a problem with the formatting? because the story seemed really choppy; was there more of the note written by Ron? If there was; it wasn\'t on screen.

thanks

red
person Inferno
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the story but in the first chapter all of the sex is missing could the writer please correct it
person Anon
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think you have a big gap in your story, fixit please
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please post the other chapters that were origionally on fanfiction.net!!!
person Anon
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok i just started reading this but is it peanut butter and ice cream or peanut butter ice cream, just curious, im a little ocd
person american werewolf
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i may be new to this whole fan fiction thing, i have been sucked in while my girl friend is out of town (she is a fanfic addict), but that is by far the best i have read so far. your writing is fantastic i cant believe i was so engrossed in something i formerly thought was just for horny people that couldnt wait for book six to come out.
person americanwerewolf
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
by far the best story i have ever read