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person kazfeist
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's an interesting start to the story....he's her rescuer, and I wonder why the wedding was disrupted? There seem to be problems in your coding, though. Some words were strung together, and there's an odd symbol where the apostrophe should be. Can't wait for the rest of the story, though. :D
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Samantha
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it.What will happen next please write more.Thank you.
person Aglaia
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
brilliant!
very well done, dear, can't wait for "another installment"
hope that its soon to come.
person Yasumi
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Come now you can\'t stop there. You must write more to this fasanating(<---can\'t spell) fic. Please write more soon.
person FoxyRoxy
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so good, please update.
person Neuri
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH you did a wedding fic!!! And you went the way of the cliffhanger! Seriously, you have to post the next chapter because your plot is going to be a doosey. Draco is believably uncomfortable with being there and Hermione\'s intense reaction to seeing him there makes me wonder why she agreed to marry Ron. Being Hermione, I can see her trying to be the bigger person and putting aside her own (probably darker) desires and go with what she knows to be undisputedly \'right\'. But damn, \'wrong\' is so much sexier :P. The line about realising that she\'ll never change Draco or his destiny was good. T's p's pretty much what the ship involves doesn\'t it? The acknowledgement that you can\'t change a person but still want to be with them. When will Hermione realise this, we won\'t know until you update, so update! Tell you what though, I was THIS close to doing an attack on the wedding for SO/BP! Exactly like you\'ve written it here. Glad someone\'s done it, anyway. And done it well. Write more (but finish your calc first)!
person Mel
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well?? Where\'s the next part!! This is soooo good!! I really really really want the next part!!!
person ashlee
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was great!!! I can\'t for you to update!! Please email me when you do!! I\'m very impressed with it!! It sounds like a great start and can\'t wait for the story unfold!!! Please notify me when you update!!

person silent seishin
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh..that was nice. I hope you continue with your story. I\'d really like to know what happens. ^^