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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!!! I\'m a Slytherin fan. You
write Draco very well, keep it up.
Write more soon!
write Draco very well, keep it up.
Write more soon!
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the unexpected pairing.
It seems to work.
It seems to work.
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October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
There are, by far, not nearly enough Ginny stories at this site. Thank you for helping to correct that grievous error. Hopefully it will encourage more to follow your excellent example.
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October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well written.please continue
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October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
update! update! i like this story!
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October 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Completed perusal of your first five chapters. I do hope that chapter five
has more to it. Am I mistaken? It seems as if its missing the \'Red Satin\'
connection, as the title of the chapter.
Overall -- Yes, I hope someone can help you with the technical problems
when uploading your submissions. My only help in that area would be
to Add Chapter with \'Text Area\' rather than \'File Upload.\' The disarray
makes for a difficult read.
As for the storyline and characterizations, damn if this isn\'t an interesting
play of seduction for those of the D/G shipper. Draco is cruel and malicious,
which is expected ... love it, don\'t change a thing. Ginny is believable and
her silent denials add more charisma to the saga.
Request? Please finish chapter five, if it is incomplete ... and add a chapter
six, a chapter seven, infinity ... Mmk, thanks.
.:| + | Avrenim | + |:.
PS It is highly doubtful that Ginny would be in a class with Malfoy, as they are
in separate years ... but as you have all ready placed the story that way it is
not necessary to change it. Its not really that big of a deal. I can live with
it, hope others can as well.
has more to it. Am I mistaken? It seems as if its missing the \'Red Satin\'
connection, as the title of the chapter.
Overall -- Yes, I hope someone can help you with the technical problems
when uploading your submissions. My only help in that area would be
to Add Chapter with \'Text Area\' rather than \'File Upload.\' The disarray
makes for a difficult read.
As for the storyline and characterizations, damn if this isn\'t an interesting
play of seduction for those of the D/G shipper. Draco is cruel and malicious,
which is expected ... love it, don\'t change a thing. Ginny is believable and
her silent denials add more charisma to the saga.
Request? Please finish chapter five, if it is incomplete ... and add a chapter
six, a chapter seven, infinity ... Mmk, thanks.
.:| + | Avrenim | + |:.
PS It is highly doubtful that Ginny would be in a class with Malfoy, as they are
in separate years ... but as you have all ready placed the story that way it is
not necessary to change it. Its not really that big of a deal. I can live with
it, hope others can as well.