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for Arithmantic Dating Agency

by Shiv5468

person LadyFlashB
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Wipes tears from eyes* Outstanding!!! Loved the dream sequence, was just too much... *Still laughing*
Yeah, why not some Filch&Minerva.
Must get back to the story, please keep writing.
person Jenny
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just almost wet myself laughing at Chap 13 and thought I\'d stop and say so before reading on.

One question, though: were Poppy and Minerva sipping from the *same* glass of firewhisky ..?
person Jenny
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In response to chap 14: That\'s Argus, not Argos. Goodness only knows what Argus actually means, but it\'s not the same as the Greek Argos (I can\'t remember what that means either, mind).
person Susan
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for my retarded last review. I must have been half-baked. This was a nice chapter. Way to leave us hanging!! ;-)
person hephastus
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the fact that he confessed the dream to her; it says so much about his character. Very sweet chapter; reminds me of a piping tune called The Clumsy Lover that a friend of mine is playing for competition. Now, whenever I hear that tune, I\'ll think of Severus.
person Ann
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yre rre ratcheting up the \"Awwww\" factor to elevator heights. And it isn\'t fluffy, thank you very much!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15... YES!!! Will we get to see the seconds & thirds, I HOPE SO!!! I very much enjoyed their conversation about the scoring,
person Hawklaw
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying the hell out of this story! Apparently, I\'m the only one not squicked by Minerva/Filch, but then I\'m a sucker for smut of any sort. I have a huge dinner party tomorrow with my husband\'s boss -- I\'m begging you for lemons before I have to go play Stepford Wife!
person mele
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you get an \"exceeds expectations\" mark! so very true to lithatthat first goofy tangle of arms and legs and not quite rythmic dance, coupled by insecurity and passion. forgeting to take your shoes off and fighting with uncratirative underwear. so how about \"in another part of the castle, minerva and filch were...) *grin* aloha, mele
person FriendlyQuark
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm. Lemony good!

I have no clue how I managed to mihat hat you had posted a chapter, normally I am rabid and pit-bull like in my pursuit of your stories. So consider this a review for the last two chapters. Argus better clean up for his date or I promise to have a bucket nearby while I read. LOL. Wow, Severus....woo hoo! wow! yay! Outstanding indeed!