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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Worth waiting for? Definitely. Merci
Blesings, Kait xxx
Blesings, Kait xxx
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter 16 clarification
Was Hermione saying that first and seconds on new sex was SUPPOSED to be disapointing and just okay, OR that it had been disappointing and just okay? Surely it was better than she had hoped. I mean, come on, it\'s Severus we are talking about here. The man is a GOD no matter how insecure he may be. (At least in my book.)
Write more soon. Love your fics.
Was Hermione saying that first and seconds on new sex was SUPPOSED to be disapointing and just okay, OR that it had been disappointing and just okay? Surely it was better than she had hoped. I mean, come on, it\'s Severus we are talking about here. The man is a GOD no matter how insecure he may be. (At least in my book.)
Write more soon. Love your fics.
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16... What a FABULOUS dessert for after dinner!!! I LOVE the playful banter between them, non-offensive & caring!!!
Can\'t wait to see if he holds true to his word of being able to go again 40 minutes later, that would not be too shabby at all!!! Til chapter 17, Deb >^..^<
Can\'t wait to see if he holds true to his word of being able to go again 40 minutes later, that would not be too shabby at all!!! Til chapter 17, Deb >^..^<
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was a lovely literary lemon, shiv.
i liked that they made each other laugh, werent too serious about getting down to business, but still enjoying themselves.
it was much better than simple pervy lemony porn. dont get me wrong, i love simple pervy lemony porn. but it was a nice lemony goodness to have them enjoying each other, and not just the sex.
um. i hope that came off as praising as i meant it to.
xoxo
...me...
i liked that they made each other laugh, werent too serious about getting down to business, but still enjoying themselves.
it was much better than simple pervy lemony porn. dont get me wrong, i love simple pervy lemony porn. but it was a nice lemony goodness to have them enjoying each other, and not just the sex.
um. i hope that came off as praising as i meant it to.
xoxo
...me...
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I always like what you write and this was quite splendid. I like Hermione\'s demanding yet sweet nature. I really laughed at this chapter as well as finding it amazingly sexy. Je t\'adore, Shiv!
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Go, Hermione, go. Also, I\'m glad Severus\'s concerns turned out to be nerves rather than actual hindrance in this case. (There\'s too much perfect / nearly perfect sex in fics, but these two deserved it.)
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic lemons! I love this story. Severus\'s last line was great.
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jaffa cakes: the special occasion biscuits.
Holy fuck. As hilarious as your story is, that single line made me lose it. Applause!
Holy fuck. As hilarious as your story is, that single line made me lose it. Applause!
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely lemons! Somehow I\'d missed the previous chapter so I had two to read. Severus may be unsure of how to proceed, but he pays attention and is enthusiastic, which counts for a great deal. Humility is good - acknowledging the other person\'s worth, without putting your self on a pedestal. Yay!
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, first, I went back and read the other reviews because I feel stupid when it looks like I haven\'t been paying attention and say the exact same thing as the review before me.
One of the things that suprised me was that the last review was from 2 weeks ago. What\'s up with that! You only had twothousand guzillion hits! Second, I also didn\'t think you got enough praise.
I will say it. YOU RULE! YOU ABSOLUTELY RULE! YOU ARE THE QUEEN OF HUMOROUS HG/SS WRITERS! YOU GAVE ME THE BIGGIST LAI HAI HAVE HAD IN FOREVER THE WHOLE WAY THROUGH! (I\'m not kidding) AND I REALLY NEEDED A GOOD LAUGH. I feel desolate I have no friends who are Harry Potter freaks I could email to read it. Ok, so I have no friends. I work too much, read Snape/Hermione stories and nap in the time other people spend making friends, I guess. But I wouldn\'t if I knew any real live people as funny as you!
You are clever, funny, intellegent and can write a story! Not all clever, funny, intellegent people can. Thank you for the laugh. My 17 year old daughter doesn\'t know it but she should be thanking you too. Because of you, I was in too good of a mood to ground her properly for leaving where she said she was going to be hanging out, not being where she was supposed to be picked up and for embarrassing me for being in the same gene pool by telling me the most lame assed, long winded, the more she talked the less I believed excuse, while still giving me muc much information to use against her at a later time.
One of the things that suprised me was that the last review was from 2 weeks ago. What\'s up with that! You only had twothousand guzillion hits! Second, I also didn\'t think you got enough praise.
I will say it. YOU RULE! YOU ABSOLUTELY RULE! YOU ARE THE QUEEN OF HUMOROUS HG/SS WRITERS! YOU GAVE ME THE BIGGIST LAI HAI HAVE HAD IN FOREVER THE WHOLE WAY THROUGH! (I\'m not kidding) AND I REALLY NEEDED A GOOD LAUGH. I feel desolate I have no friends who are Harry Potter freaks I could email to read it. Ok, so I have no friends. I work too much, read Snape/Hermione stories and nap in the time other people spend making friends, I guess. But I wouldn\'t if I knew any real live people as funny as you!
You are clever, funny, intellegent and can write a story! Not all clever, funny, intellegent people can. Thank you for the laugh. My 17 year old daughter doesn\'t know it but she should be thanking you too. Because of you, I was in too good of a mood to ground her properly for leaving where she said she was going to be hanging out, not being where she was supposed to be picked up and for embarrassing me for being in the same gene pool by telling me the most lame assed, long winded, the more she talked the less I believed excuse, while still giving me muc much information to use against her at a later time.