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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How ever you do it is beyond me, wrapping up funny, warm and touching in one lovely chapter (you couldn\'t write duff with two hands, one foot and half your brain tied behind your back, btw). The realization that Severus\' misery was due in no small part to the sharp contrast of a weekend of happiness is just so bittersweet.... sniff.
Here\'s to happy endings all around, even if my mind does catch just a bit at Argus\' obvious reluctant to take advantage of the school\'s dental plan.
Here\'s to happy endings all around, even if my mind does catch just a bit at Argus\' obvious reluctant to take advantage of the school\'s dental plan.
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, please don\'t make us wait so long for another update.
D.A.
D.A.
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you are just an outstanding writer and you do humor very well. I look forward to all your updates.
I thought I would mention that I think one of the sexiest scenes I have ever read is the one in \"Is that a hint of lemon?\". I\'m referring to the section \'And then it seemed the most natural thing [...] and he came to an overwhelming, shuddering stop.\'
My mind just runs wild with this scene and fills in all sorts of romantic/sexy details. Have you ever seen \"Gone With the Wind\" where Rhett carries Scarlet up the stairs and you just start picturing what is going to happen? I have the same reaction to this scene. Plus I think it\'s extremely well written and just draws you into the story.
ur lur lemons are great too, and I hope you never drop them. I just wanted to mention this scene because it\'s a little bit of a change of pace and makes the buildup to the next chapter that much better.
Please keep the updates on your stories coming.
I thought I would mention that I think one of the sexiest scenes I have ever read is the one in \"Is that a hint of lemon?\". I\'m referring to the section \'And then it seemed the most natural thing [...] and he came to an overwhelming, shuddering stop.\'
My mind just runs wild with this scene and fills in all sorts of romantic/sexy details. Have you ever seen \"Gone With the Wind\" where Rhett carries Scarlet up the stairs and you just start picturing what is going to happen? I have the same reaction to this scene. Plus I think it\'s extremely well written and just draws you into the story.
ur lur lemons are great too, and I hope you never drop them. I just wanted to mention this scene because it\'s a little bit of a change of pace and makes the buildup to the next chapter that much better.
Please keep the updates on your stories coming.
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice literary lemon in chapter 16, and wonderful relationship building in 17. Can\'t wait for more!!
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Definitely worth the wait! Keep going Shiv, I love your stories they always make me smile and swoon over dear delicious Sevvie! More, more, and as soon as possible please!
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that last line was excellent! Great chemistry between them. I like her musings on Filch\'s experience with cats.
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"they were as comfortable together as an old married couple, but without the lingering resentments built up over twenty years.\" Oh Shiv honey, that one killed me and then the line about looking in the candy store window hurt my heart right after, a sort of one-two emotional punch. The chapter was elegant and perfect. kiss, kiss!
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying this story. Good lemons.
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter. You\'ve inspired me to pawn all the kids off on my mother and have my husband cook for me tonight. Why should Hermione have all the fun? Seriously, great story. I don\'t have much time to read fics lately, but I always read your updates.
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering what the house-elves were going to say
*grins*
Nice chapter. :)
*grins*
Nice chapter. :)